Ray Dillard Poet Rhyme

My Perfect Granddaughter Nr

My perfect Granddaughter,
She did what she outta,
And asked before going to play.

But we didn't know,
The babe needed to go,
So, she did it outside that day.

Her Mom, full of laughter,
Was quick to chase after,
And told her that she shouldn't do it.

The babe said,"It's OK!"
"Whenever I play,
I'll be sure not to run through it!"

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Carrie Richards April 24, 2013 at 7:06 PM Kids will be kids........this makes me laugh......my grandson used to do the same thing!! So cute is this!! :)

Delysia Hendricks April 11, 2013 at 12:57 PM hahaha. Good one, Ray. I like your sense of humor and your ability to pen it. :)

Carol Eastman March 30, 2013 at 10:00 AM Oh, No! LOL... Congrats on such a delightful win!

Poet Destroyer A March 29, 2013 at 8:05 PM Hi Ray, i like the poem, congratulations with your wonderful win in Debra's "Nursery Rhyme" contest. Love the message in the poem. Take care and enjoy the up coming Easter Holiday. Always*LINDA

Joyce Johnson March 29, 2013 at 6:22 PM I like your cute little ditty. It has that special nursery rhyme style. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Sara Kendrick March 29, 2013 at 5:35 PM Congrats on your great win..Sara

Debbie Guzzi March 29, 2013 at 4:40 PM Congrad's on your win Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich March 29, 2013 at 4:14 PM ray, I remember this one and it's one of the humorous ones. Congrats on your win, my friend.

Debra Squyres March 29, 2013 at 12:01 PM Thank you for entering my contest and Congratulations on your win !!! This was so cute and reminded me of my grandchildren... enjoyed !!

Fred Bell March 21, 2013 at 10:50 AM funny we know how kids are.

Andrea Dietrich March 18, 2013 at 10:06 PM ray ,if you go back to that poem of mine that was on PD's funny contest winners list, you will see the explanation I just added to the bottom of it. I was just having a joking time with that one. hahaha.

Poet Destroyer A March 18, 2013 at 7:24 PM Ray, I like this poem, I have a perfect granddaughter .... . Enjoyed stopping by to read your poem. Always* LINDA

Andrea Dietrich March 18, 2013 at 3:04 PM the ending on this was so cute, Ray. Fun little poem. which nursery rhyme is it based on?

Sara Kendrick March 18, 2013 at 11:30 AM Children are full of surprises_sometimes good and sometimes bad...Thanks for stopping by with your kind comment..Sara