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My Perfect Granddaughter NR

My perfect Granddaughter, She did what she outta, And asked before going to play. But we didn't know, The babe needed to go, So, she did it outside that day. Her Mom, full of laughter, Was quick to chase after, And told her that she shouldn't do it. The babe said,"It's OK!" "Whenever I play, I'll be sure not to run through it!"

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Date: 4/24/2013 7:06:00 PM
Kids will be kids........this makes me grandson used to do the same thing!! So cute is this!! :)
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Date: 4/11/2013 12:57:00 PM
hahaha. Good one, Ray. I like your sense of humor and your ability to pen it. :)
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Date: 3/30/2013 10:00:00 AM
Oh, No! LOL... Congrats on such a delightful win!
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Date: 3/29/2013 8:05:00 PM
Hi Ray, i like the poem, congratulations with your wonderful win in Debra's "Nursery Rhyme" contest. Love the message in the poem. Take care and enjoy the up coming Easter Holiday. Always*LINDA
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Date: 3/29/2013 6:22:00 PM
I like your cute little ditty. It has that special nursery rhyme style. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/29/2013 5:35:00 PM
Congrats on your great win..Sara
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Date: 3/29/2013 4:40:00 PM
Congrad's on your win Light & Love
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Date: 3/29/2013 4:14:00 PM
ray, I remember this one and it's one of the humorous ones. Congrats on your win, my friend.
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Date: 3/29/2013 12:01:00 PM
Thank you for entering my contest and Congratulations on your win !!! This was so cute and reminded me of my grandchildren... enjoyed !!
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Date: 3/21/2013 10:50:00 AM
funny we know how kids are.
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Date: 3/20/2013 10:32:00 AM
Awe!! This is the sweetest and most precious poem I have read this morning. I love it, Ray. :)
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Date: 3/18/2013 10:06:00 PM
ray ,if you go back to that poem of mine that was on PD's funny contest winners list, you will see the explanation I just added to the bottom of it. I was just having a joking time with that one. hahaha.
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Date: 3/18/2013 7:24:00 PM
Ray, I like this poem, I have a perfect granddaughter .... . Enjoyed stopping by to read your poem. Always* LINDA
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Date: 3/18/2013 3:04:00 PM
the ending on this was so cute, Ray. Fun little poem. which nursery rhyme is it based on?
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Date: 3/18/2013 11:30:00 AM
Children are full of surprises_sometimes good and sometimes bad...Thanks for stopping by with your kind comment..Sara
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