My Pen

The pen is my friend
I bleed and he eases the pain
When the sieve is full
he pours it out-
Enough to fill
An empty space
or a spotless white parchment.
The rain comes to my mind
and he makes sense out of it.
Madness fills the air
But he makes symphony on
The cacophony of noises.
Now I swirl in pain
and hopelessness flung flayed
But with my pen, my dearest pen
There's peace.
And here I truly exist
as I would wish to exist
and more -
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 3/2/2011 12:08:00 PM
BRILLIANT! Jan. Many congra's on your well-deserved win. Lainie
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Date: 3/1/2011 11:15:00 PM
thanks for all the congratulatory messages. its really an honor to be a part of the list ^_^
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Date: 3/1/2011 10:45:00 PM
Many congrats Jan in Drakes contest with this maginative write my friend. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 2/28/2011 2:21:00 PM
Congrats Jan on your HM in Drake's contest with this superb write luv.. enjoy your very special honor.....
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Date: 2/28/2011 12:43:00 PM
Congratulations on the HM win in the contest of Drake, Jan
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Date: 2/28/2011 12:23:00 PM
Great Job Jan. Good to see you honored again. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored success in Drake's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/28/2011 12:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Drake's contest Jan. Love, Carol
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