Bj Legros Kelley Poet Rhyme

My Pen

In tears and sorrow
                                          it would be
                                      When I lay down
                                             my pen
                                       If never I could
                                         Cleanse my 
                                             heart 
                                       Through poetry 
                                             again
          

                                   'Bite Size Poem no.5'

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Anna Marie Kaianah March 7, 2023 at 9:13 PM Congratulations on your win my friend! Sorry, I am writing this late. This is beautifully written. <3 Hope you never stop writing! ~Anna Kaianah

Jan Allison June 10, 2021 at 3:55 PM I can relate big time BJ, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Bj Legros Kelley June 10, 2021 at 4:38 PM Thank you Jan :-) It really would be a sorrow if you lost your pen. I have enjoyed reading your poems many times in the past, and now there is, hopefully, a lull in the busy-ness that has gripped me for months. I can hardly wait to get over and see what your pen has been up to! <3

Sam Kauffman June 10, 2021 at 10:19 AM Congratulations on your win BJ! This reminds me of Emily Dickinson. The heart of a poet in poignant words. Congratulations on your win. Bj Legros Kelley June 10, 2021 at 2:53 PM Sam, that is the sweetest and most appreciated compliment possible to me, this brought tears! Thank you so very much for your amazingly kind words!

Jenna Logan June 10, 2021 at 6:53 AM That would be a tragedy. Congratulations on you winning placement. Bj Legros Kelley June 10, 2021 at 2:57 PM Thank you Jenna <3 A poets pen, the channel off the rivers of our hearts would be an unspeakably great loss to any poet for certain <3

Regina Mcintosh June 10, 2021 at 5:10 AM Wonderful writing... yes and so true. Congrats to you. God bless you, Love, Gina Bj Legros Kelley June 11, 2021 at 12:03 PM Thank you Regina! God bless you too sweet lady <3

Rama Balasubramanian June 9, 2021 at 10:37 PM I agree, beautiful write. Congratulations Bj Legros Kelley June 10, 2021 at 3:00 PM Thank you so much Gina, you're a shining light of the sweetest poetry, I love reading your poems. I pray you never, ever lose your pen! <3

Christuraj Alex June 9, 2021 at 10:32 PM Beautifully Written. Congratulations! Bj Legros Kelley June 10, 2021 at 3:01 PM Thank you so very much, I appreciate your kind words!

Kim Rodrigues December 8, 2020 at 5:53 PM Yes, indeed, poetry helps so much! Much like the book of psalms! Bj Legros Kelley June 11, 2021 at 12:00 PM The Book of Psalms is my favorite, I love that Book of Poems!! Thank you for stopping by with your kind encouragement! God bless you Kim! <3

Christopher Quigley December 8, 2020 at 3:50 PM Cool flow Bj Legros Kelley June 11, 2021 at 12:00 PM Thank you!

Sarah Kettle December 8, 2020 at 3:19 PM My sentiments exactly! Well done Bj Legros Kelley June 11, 2021 at 12:02 PM Thank you for stopping by Sarah <3 A poets heart without a way to pour out would be unbearable!

Christopher Grieves September 27, 2020 at 12:43 AM Wonderfully put x Bj Legros Kelley September 30, 2020 at 12:02 PM Thank you so much.