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In tears and sorrow it would be When I lay down my pen If never I could Cleanse my heart Through poetry again 'Bite Size Poem no.5'

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Date: 3/7/2023 9:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win my friend! Sorry, I am writing this late. This is beautifully written. <3 Hope you never stop writing! ~Anna Kaianah
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Date: 6/10/2021 3:55:00 PM
I can relate big time BJ, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 6/10/2021 4:38:00 PM
Thank you Jan :-) It really would be a sorrow if you lost your pen. I have enjoyed reading your poems many times in the past, and now there is, hopefully, a lull in the busy-ness that has gripped me for months. I can hardly wait to get over and see what your pen has been up to! <3
Date: 6/10/2021 10:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win BJ! This reminds me of Emily Dickinson. The heart of a poet in poignant words. Congratulations on your win.
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 6/10/2021 2:53:00 PM
Sam, that is the sweetest and most appreciated compliment possible to me, this brought tears! Thank you so very much for your amazingly kind words!
Date: 6/10/2021 6:53:00 AM
That would be a tragedy. Congratulations on you winning placement.
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 6/10/2021 2:57:00 PM
Thank you Jenna <3 A poets pen, the channel off the rivers of our hearts would be an unspeakably great loss to any poet for certain <3
Date: 6/10/2021 5:10:00 AM
Wonderful writing... yes and so true. Congrats to you. God bless you, Love, Gina
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 6/11/2021 12:03:00 PM
Thank you Regina! God bless you too sweet lady <3
Date: 6/9/2021 10:37:00 PM
I agree, beautiful write. Congratulations
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 6/10/2021 3:00:00 PM
Thank you so much Gina, you're a shining light of the sweetest poetry, I love reading your poems. I pray you never, ever lose your pen! <3
Date: 6/9/2021 10:32:00 PM
Beautifully Written. Congratulations!
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 6/10/2021 3:01:00 PM
Thank you so very much, I appreciate your kind words!
Date: 12/8/2020 5:53:00 PM
Yes, indeed, poetry helps so much! Much like the book of psalms!
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 6/11/2021 12:00:00 PM
The Book of Psalms is my favorite, I love that Book of Poems!! Thank you for stopping by with your kind encouragement! God bless you Kim! <3
Date: 12/8/2020 3:50:00 PM
Cool flow
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 6/11/2021 12:00:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 12/8/2020 3:19:00 PM
My sentiments exactly! Well done
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 6/11/2021 12:02:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by Sarah <3 A poets heart without a way to pour out would be unbearable!
Date: 9/27/2020 12:43:00 AM
Wonderfully put x
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 9/30/2020 12:02:00 PM
Thank you so much.

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