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My Peep Izzi's Band

'Mom, dad', I’m going out to the bar Where my 'peep Izzi', rocks her guitar Her 'gig' will top rock charts Though it’s not for 'pop' tarts Specially, since her band’s called ‘Rats Star’.

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/15/2024 7:00:00 PM

Nice palindrome there, David! ~ Pal In Drone

Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 6/19/2024 12:34:00 AM

Adorable piece enjoyed reading your poem many blessings

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/1/2024 10:22:00 PM

So cute. Big congrats, David

David Fisher
Date: 6/3/2024 3:53:00 PM

Thanks so much; a fun challenge.

Crystol Woods

Date: 5/31/2024 5:05:00 PM

Nice! You fit so many in and still made sense!<3

David Crandall

Date: 5/31/2024 9:19:00 AM

'Yay!' 'Rats Star' - Congratulations David!

Joseph May

Date: 5/31/2024 5:02:00 AM

Very nicely done, Congrats on your win

David Fisher
Date: 6/3/2024 3:53:00 PM

Thanks for the challenge!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/29/2024 10:18:00 AM

I'm interested. Never heard of peep Izzie. Thanks for another great limerick.

David Fisher
Date: 5/31/2024 4:30:00 AM

Thanks Hilda! Peep Izzi is a palindrome rock star, from 'Star Rats', lol.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/29/2024 10:16:00 AM

David, your limerick is so filled with "rockin'" delight! And, like Daniel said, it is a wonderful tribute to friends who support one's creative endeavors. They are treasures! Cute monorhyme scheme and play on words. So glad to see you posting again especially with this lighthearted fun! Thanks for the musical fun!! Looking for "Izzi" at the top of the charts. Blessings!

David Fisher
Date: 5/31/2024 4:32:00 AM

Thanks Sam for your great comments!

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/29/2024 6:10:00 AM

Hey David, Your poem is such a fun and lively piece! You perfectly capture the excitement and pride of supporting a friend. The playful rhymes and clever wordplay, especially with "Rats Star," are great. It feels like a spirited anthem for those nights out, cheering on loved ones. Your poem rocks just as much as Izzi’s band surely does. Keep sharing your awesome energy! - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

David Fisher
Date: 5/31/2024 4:34:00 AM

Thanks so much, Daniel. I appreciate your in depth and thoughtful words!