My Peep Izzi's Band

'Mom, dad', I’m going out to the bar 
Where my 'peep Izzi', rocks her guitar
Her 'gig' will top rock charts
Though it’s not for 'pop' tarts
Specially, since her band’s called ‘Rats Star’.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Wolf Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 7:00 PM
Nice palindrome there, David! ~ Pal In Drone
Nicholsen Avatar
June 19, 2024 at 12:34 AM
Adorable piece enjoyed reading your poem many blessings
Dietrich Avatar
June 1, 2024 at 10:22 PM
So cute. Big congrats, David
Fisher Avatar
June 3, 2024 at 3:53 PM
Thanks so much; a fun challenge.
Woods Avatar
May 31, 2024 at 5:05 PM
Nice! You fit so many in and still made sense!<3
Crandall Avatar
May 31, 2024 at 9:19 AM
'Yay!' 'Rats Star' - Congratulations David!
May Avatar
May 31, 2024 at 5:02 AM
Very nicely done, Congrats on your win
Fisher Avatar
June 3, 2024 at 3:53 PM
Thanks for the challenge!
Greenhough Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 10:18 AM
I'm interested. Never heard of peep Izzie. Thanks for another great limerick.
Fisher Avatar
May 31, 2024 at 4:30 AM
Thanks Hilda! Peep Izzi is a palindrome rock star, from 'Star Rats', lol.
Kauffman Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 10:16 AM
David, your limerick is so filled with "rockin'" delight! And, like Daniel said, it is a wonderful tribute to friends who support one's creative endeavors. They are treasures! Cute monorhyme scheme and play on words. So glad to see you posting again especially with this lighthearted fun! Thanks for the musical fun!! Looking for "Izzi" at the top of the charts. Blessings!
Fisher Avatar
May 31, 2024 at 4:32 AM
Thanks Sam for your great comments!
Rodgers Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 6:10 AM
Hey David, Your poem is such a fun and lively piece! You perfectly capture the excitement and pride of supporting a friend. The playful rhymes and clever wordplay, especially with "Rats Star," are great. It feels like a spirited anthem for those nights out, cheering on loved ones. Your poem rocks just as much as Izzi’s band surely does. Keep sharing your awesome energy! - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Fisher Avatar
May 31, 2024 at 4:34 AM
Thanks so much, Daniel. I appreciate your in depth and thoughtful words!
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