My Peaceful Toilet

A peaceful place is not only the Antarctic or sea but the toilet seat.Sitting on it and doing my business is like heaven for me.

But when I see YouTube while doing my work is like having Dorito's with chesse.

When I go inside the toilet it feels like I am entering a whole new world where I can do anything I want and nobody is going to stop me and makes me feel like I am in my own country.

But when I exit it is like leaving my most cherished possessions and makes me feel like crying.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Agustin Avatar
September 18, 2024 at 5:11 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Dupins Avatar
April 20, 2017 at 1:17 PM
This was pretty funny! I needed that relief! Comedic that is.
Ramchandani Avatar
August 22, 2017 at 11:42 AM
Thx
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 20, 2017 at 12:05 PM
Lol AWESOME 7 for this daring piece ;) xomo!
Ramchandani Avatar
August 22, 2017 at 11:41 AM
Thx
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