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My Passion Sores

Maria, oh Maria, wherefore art thou Be sworn my love, my passion sores(?) like a swallow Very poetic eh? Amazing you say? Received the OBE, sent is back coz in awards I wallow

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Maria Williams

Date: 4/9/2018 7:12:00 AM

Me thinks thou two knightly gentlemen hast been carried away. Natheless, this 'Sheila' accepts thy compliments in the good grace it hadst been bestowed in. Maria xox

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/9/2018 8:26:00 AM

(grin) Thou speaketh with such sophisticated and intellectual dialog... like a true lady of the realm!!! XOXOXOX

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/9/2018 6:21:00 AM

Into his life she flew like a white dove/jack then knew that he was in love/she was a Sheila /her name was maria/a gift from the heavens above /

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/9/2018 8:44:00 AM

oooooooh you speaketh such truth Sir Thomas! From the heavens, she doth float!!!