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My Parting Gifts

The Angels have come to take me away The only hug I can give are the words I write today In my shaking hand They've placed a golden pen So I ponder my past my here now and then What words of wisdom do I have to impart? At this moment I wish to express my whole heart When you find your soul is aching and you're far from okay The best gift I can offer is to learn how to pray For nothing is as bad as often it seems Although life has tearful moments you must cling to your dreams Cry when you need to don't keep emotions trapped inside Happiness needs growing space It's blocked by what we hide Let tears cleanse your spirit loss and love makes you whole Don't avoid your sadness it strengthens the soul Nothing is forever so take many chances Each stage in your life is a collection of dances Breathe in every moment until your very last breath Because not truly living is a sad sort of death!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/10/2016 5:21:00 PM
Awesome work !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
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Date: 9/2/2016 7:56:00 PM
Richard, lovely poem, congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 9/2/2016 12:02:00 PM
Great gifts...Congrats. Sunita
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Date: 9/2/2016 9:24:00 AM
Congrats Richard, for your WIN with this awesome poem!! ;-)
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Date: 3/6/2016 12:33:00 AM
Richard, this is an E X C E L L E N T poem, so beautifully penned, everything written so wise, wonderful, and I am loving this 7 ~
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/6/2016 7:49:00 AM
Hi Constance, I'm pleased you like it.
Date: 2/24/2016 12:50:00 AM
Richard - I was drawn to your line; 'loss and love makes you whole'. Reminded me of Ecclesiastes 7:3 "Sorrow is better than laughter: for by the sadness of the countenance the heart is made better." Good luck in the contest.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/24/2016 1:52:00 AM
Thanks for your thoughtful comment Rob.
Date: 2/19/2016 2:39:00 PM
I truly enjoyed this outstanding poem, Richard! Beautifully expressed, and I could truly relate to all your parting pearls of wisdom! I hope this rates high in the contest :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/21/2016 11:34:00 AM
Thanks Laura.
Date: 2/18/2016 10:31:00 AM
"Learn how to pray..." Such tender advice and wisdom you express. Excellent! Good luck in the contest.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/19/2016 9:09:00 AM
Thanks Susan.
Date: 2/17/2016 3:38:00 PM
richard< I need to revise mine yet, but I had two of your three gifts in MY poem (don't want you to think I copied you). I was going to be sarcastic with it, try for humor, since this is such a difficult challenge for me. I think I need to go to serious because the humor may be misuderstood. SUre hope mine will look as nice as yours when I am finished!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/18/2016 7:15:00 AM
I'm sure you will do great Andrea.
Date: 2/17/2016 12:39:00 PM
WOW, Richard.... well expressed. Thank you for the message. I do hope you do well for this contest. LINDA
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/18/2016 7:16:00 AM
Me too! Thanks Linda.
Date: 2/17/2016 10:56:00 AM
You are right. We too often do not let our true emotions out and hide what we really feel. Good luck in the contest. Oh I do share my tears do I not? Miss you Love Mom
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/18/2016 7:17:00 AM
Yes you do! It's one of the things about you that makes you so lovable.
Date: 2/17/2016 10:43:00 AM
Wise words from a wise man! x
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/18/2016 7:17:00 AM
Thanks Casarah. Hugs Rick.
Date: 2/16/2016 11:12:00 PM
A wise poet you are Richard. It was a great read. Full of inspiration. Regards, Craig
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/17/2016 8:13:00 AM
Thanks Craig.
Date: 2/16/2016 3:39:00 PM
This is a wonderful entry. Your parting wisdom is so thoughtful and the closing lines Superb. SuZ
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/17/2016 8:14:00 AM
Thanks SuZ. Hugs Rick.
Date: 2/16/2016 10:14:00 AM
'...life drips in liquid moments' is such a fabulous phrase! Well contrived and expressed with a smooth cadence and fine rhyming! Well done Richard!! Best wishes, Keith
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/17/2016 8:14:00 AM
Thanks Keith.;0)
Date: 2/16/2016 4:37:00 AM
This is such an awesome write Richard. Love the wisdom shared, especially when it comes to tears.. People think when you cry it is a sign of weakness. First poem I read today. It is a gem. All the best for the contest :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/16/2016 8:44:00 AM
What a thoughtful comment. Thanks Wilma.
Date: 2/16/2016 12:00:00 AM
I run out of compliments it seems when reading your introspective pieces. All I can say is what it meant to me ... I wholeheartedly agree with your humble advice, and each line was dripping with wisdom (perhaps even like liquid moments).
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/16/2016 8:43:00 AM
I so enjoy your comments Tim.
Date: 2/15/2016 9:03:00 PM
Yes dance....and enjoy today...just lovely Richard...hope all is well
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/16/2016 8:42:00 AM
Yes all is well, busy but good.
Date: 2/15/2016 2:58:00 PM
I wish you long life, dear, along with health and happiness. This is a very sage advice....one I wish I could take to my heart. You have again captured beauty, even with a difficult prompt. hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/16/2016 8:39:00 AM
Hugs back to you Eileen, I'm off to see what you have come up with this morning.
Date: 2/15/2016 1:51:00 PM
Absolutely love this piece! Great words to live by :) Faving this for sure.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/16/2016 8:38:00 AM
Thanks Carol, ;0)
Date: 2/15/2016 12:49:00 PM
Your work shouts of a subtle wisdom gently distributed throughout your poem. You did a wonderful job here. I read it several times and it came alive for me. Your talent comes through strong and straight from the heart of a gifted poet. Emile.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/16/2016 8:35:00 AM
You are kind! Much appreciated.
Date: 2/15/2016 11:59:00 AM
Solid and inspiring advice has your golden pen written, dear Richard! Certainly, whoever is the recipient of it, will become richer and wiser! A seven my friend!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/16/2016 8:11:00 AM
Thank you my friend.
Date: 2/15/2016 11:18:00 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed this one. Nicely done.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/16/2016 8:06:00 AM
Thanks Luke.
Date: 2/15/2016 10:49:00 AM
I enjoyed your write very much, many lines are incredibly beautiful and all stanzas touching. I teared up writing mine and spent the day shaking it off! Wasn't it hard to pick just 3 philosophies! Oh, did you ever have to make up your mind. All the best ... CayCay
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/15/2016 11:09:00 AM
You did a great job Cay Cay.

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