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My Paradise

log cabin hidden away within the woods wolves watching over me as night turns into day the warm ashes of the bonfire still send off a curl of smoke into the morning air as i stand on the back porch looking out into the wild from my paradise karen croft challenge-max 8 lines 10-09-11

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Date: 10/14/2011 7:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry placing in Russell's "Challenge" contest Karen. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/12/2011 4:25:00 AM
Very nice Karen!Congrats on your win.
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Date: 10/12/2011 12:56:00 AM
I'll say it sounds like paradise. I live in a log home, so I live in paradise each day. It is wonderful. Congratulations on your win. Take care. Lee
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Date: 10/11/2011 11:25:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Karen. Excellent piece. Nice going. luv Ralph
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Date: 10/11/2011 9:10:00 PM
Congrats Karen on a super second place win my friend with these dynamic words of poetry for the contest challenge ..enjoy .hope all is going well .. we finally moved into our new home..oh the big job ahead now.. but so lovely ..
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