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Years and years ago Grandpa gave me a horse, a beautiful Palomino that I named Patch; oh, she was so gentle, lovely and smart, everything was perfect until . . . The farm was sold and I had to consider, the best future of my precious pet; I searched and searched for a place for her, and found an outside building . . . It was an open air dwelling on a farm, for many horses and not too expensive; my intentions were to find someplace better, but Patch did go there to stay . . . At first it was fine but soon I hated it, I wanted Patch in a nice warm stall; not in this open air barn of sorts, each month the need was greater . . . I remember those days of so long ago, and it was with love I made a decision; to find my girl a perfect forever home, so I sold my beloved pet . . . A lady bought her for a companion, and invited me to her farm to visit; Patch had a warm stall and a new friend, and I could come to see her . . . ________________________________________ March 10, 2018 Poetry/Verse/My Palomino Copyright Protected, ID 18-1002-790-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Eight Word Challenge sponsor, Robert Haigh Ninth Place

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Date: 4/4/2018 6:02:00 AM
I had quite a few horses and they went 'to the other side' upon divorce. I guess that their home is alright, but I still miss them. Kai
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Date: 3/15/2018 9:33:00 PM
Wonderful imagery in your poem, Broken Wings , and written very well using the required words. Congratulations on your win! Hugs ~`*
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Date: 3/15/2018 7:47:00 PM
Lovely memories showcased in your beautiful poem, Constance. Congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/15/2018 1:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Constance with a lovely poem.
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Date: 3/14/2018 11:54:00 PM
Wonderful write! Sincere congratulations on your well-deserved win, Constance - blessings, and keep up the great work, friend! :-) <3
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Date: 3/14/2018 9:17:00 PM
Lovely little piece, Constance, well done. Viv x
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Date: 3/14/2018 3:53:00 PM
Delightful story, BW. A most charming read. Congrats.
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Date: 3/12/2018 8:22:00 AM
A delightful yet sad piece.
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Date: 3/11/2018 8:20:00 AM
A sweet write BW.
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Date: 3/10/2018 8:14:00 PM
Beautiful narrative poem. It gives me pleasure reading the way you found a farm for the pet.
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