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My Palomino

Years and years ago Grandpa gave me a horse,
    a beautiful Palomino that I named Patch;
oh, she was so gentle, lovely and smart,
        everything was perfect until . . . 

The farm was sold and I had to consider,
    the best future of my precious pet;
I searched and searched for a place for her,
        and found an outside building . . . 

It was an open air dwelling on a farm,
    for many horses and not too expensive;
my intentions were to find someplace better,
        but Patch did go there to stay . . . 

At first it was fine but soon I hated it,
     I wanted Patch in a nice warm stall;
not in this open air barn of sorts,
        each month the need was greater . . . 

I remember those days of so long ago,
    and it was with love I made a decision;
to find my girl a perfect forever home,
        so I sold my beloved pet . . . 

A lady bought her for a companion,
    and invited me to her farm to visit;
Patch had a warm stall and a new friend,
        and I could come to see her . . . 

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March 10, 2018


Poetry/Verse/My Palomino
Copyright Protected, ID 18-1002-790-01
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.



Written for the contest, Eight Word Challenge
sponsor, Robert Haigh

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Neumann Avatar
April 4, 2018 at 6:02 AM
I had quite a few horses and they went 'to the other side' upon divorce. I guess that their home is alright, but I still miss them. Kai
Roper Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 9:33 PM
Wonderful imagery in your poem, Broken Wings , and written very well using the required words. Congratulations on your win! Hugs ~`*
Haight Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 7:47 PM
Lovely memories showcased in your beautiful poem, Constance. Congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 1:17 AM
Congratulations on your win, Constance with a lovely poem.
Barden Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 11:54 PM
Wonderful write! Sincere congratulations on your well-deserved win, Constance - blessings, and keep up the great work, friend! :-) <3
Wigley Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 9:17 PM
Lovely little piece, Constance, well done. Viv x
Gauthier Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 3:53 PM
Delightful story, BW. A most charming read. Congrats.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 8:22 AM
A delightful yet sad piece.
Inman Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 8:20 AM
A sweet write BW.
Sewumber Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 8:14 PM
Beautiful narrative poem. It gives me pleasure reading the way you found a farm for the pet.
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