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My painful dream

My painful dream....... My bed and pillow will tell you about my dream That I see you every night in my dream You don't know my pain that I go through without you being close to me Always, your face appear in my dream and ends as dream with painful of thoughts Living with your imagination love kills me little by little I cannot seem to leave your thoughts behind Because my love on you like an ocean and cannot be erased You came into my life with full of love and affection and planted a seed of love in my heart Now you have gone so far away from me while allowing your seed of love to grow wild on me. Although you have sworn me that your love is true but today you made me nothing but dream of you Until, I see you again, my tears will burn my cheeks and my hand will clutch my heart with pain. Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved @2106 Ravi Sathasivam

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Date: 6/27/2016 5:34:00 PM
Loving and very touching my friend. Beautifully expressed. My favorite line being: "Until I see you again my tears will burn my cheeks and my hand will clutch my heart with pain." A seven from me. God Bless, JB
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 7/4/2016 1:02:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Appreciated.
Date: 6/22/2016 3:39:00 PM
Ravi, oh such a sadly beautiful poem that I am loving 7 ~
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 6/27/2016 4:52:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Appreciated.
Date: 6/18/2016 12:09:00 AM
So painful...why loving someone gives so much pain...good write!
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 6/22/2016 2:16:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated.
Date: 6/16/2016 5:39:00 PM
I love the depth of emotion this poem exudes Ravi. It is heartfelt, bittersweet but beautiful! #7 ; )
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 6/22/2016 2:17:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated.
Date: 6/16/2016 11:27:00 AM
Touched by these painful emotions, Ravi. Why does love have to be like this!! ~ Regards // paul
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 6/22/2016 2:17:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated.
Date: 6/15/2016 4:56:00 PM
Love poured out upon the page..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visit ...I appreciate you stopping by..Sara
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 6/22/2016 2:18:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated.
Date: 6/15/2016 3:37:00 PM
This has Ravi written all over it. Your trademark is poetry like this, Ravi. writing in such a lovely way about pain!!
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 6/22/2016 2:18:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated.
Date: 6/15/2016 1:26:00 PM
- Ravi, this poem is a deeply heartbreaking write .... beautiful in sadness - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 6/22/2016 2:19:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend Anne. Appreciated. Hugs and kissesxxxxx
Date: 6/15/2016 7:31:00 AM
Very sentimental and dramatic poem that attracts the attention of the reader dear, Ravi!
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 6/22/2016 2:20:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated.
Date: 6/15/2016 12:57:00 AM
this is heartfelt and so beautiful
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 6/22/2016 2:21:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated.