Ravi Sathasivam Poet Light Verse

My Painful Dream

My painful dream.......

My bed and pillow will tell you about my dream
That I see you every night in my dream
You don't know my pain that I go through
without you being close to me
Always, your face appear in my dream and
ends as dream with painful of thoughts
Living with your imagination love kills me little by little
I cannot seem to leave your thoughts behind
Because my love on you like an ocean and cannot be erased
You came into my life with full of love and affection
and planted a seed of love in my heart
Now you have gone so far away from me
while allowing your seed of love to grow wild on me.
Although you have sworn me that your love is true
but today you made me nothing but dream of you
Until, I see you again, my tears will burn my cheeks and
my hand will clutch my heart with pain.

Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka

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Judy Ball June 27, 2016 at 5:34 PM Loving and very touching my friend. Beautifully expressed. My favorite line being: "Until I see you again my tears will burn my cheeks and my hand will clutch my heart with pain." A seven from me. God Bless, JB Ravi Sathasivam July 4, 2016 at 1:02 AM Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Appreciated.

Constance La France June 22, 2016 at 3:39 PM Ravi, oh such a sadly beautiful poem that I am loving 7 ~ Ravi Sathasivam June 27, 2016 at 4:52 AM Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Appreciated.

Sunita U.D Palawon June 18, 2016 at 12:09 AM So painful...why loving someone gives so much pain...good write! Ravi Sathasivam June 22, 2016 at 2:16 AM Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated.

Connie Marcum Wong June 16, 2016 at 5:39 PM I love the depth of emotion this poem exudes Ravi. It is heartfelt, bittersweet but beautiful! #7 ; ) Ravi Sathasivam June 22, 2016 at 2:17 AM Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated.

Paul Callus June 16, 2016 at 11:27 AM Touched by these painful emotions, Ravi. Why does love have to be like this!! ~ Regards // paul Ravi Sathasivam June 22, 2016 at 2:17 AM Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated.

Sara Kendrick June 15, 2016 at 4:56 PM Love poured out upon the page..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visit ...I appreciate you stopping by..Sara Ravi Sathasivam June 22, 2016 at 2:18 AM Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich June 15, 2016 at 3:37 PM This has Ravi written all over it. Your trademark is poetry like this, Ravi. writing in such a lovely way about pain!! Ravi Sathasivam June 22, 2016 at 2:18 AM Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated.

Anne-Lise Andresen June 15, 2016 at 1:26 PM - Ravi, this poem is a deeply heartbreaking write .... beautiful in sadness - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Ravi Sathasivam June 22, 2016 at 2:19 AM Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend Anne. Appreciated. Hugs and kissesxxxxx

Demetrios Trifiatis June 15, 2016 at 7:31 AM Very sentimental and dramatic poem that attracts the attention of the reader dear, Ravi! Ravi Sathasivam June 22, 2016 at 2:20 AM Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated.

Aishwarya Vr June 15, 2016 at 12:57 AM this is heartfelt and so beautiful Ravi Sathasivam June 22, 2016 at 2:21 AM Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated.