My Pain

I stand and view the sun
as it burns the pain in me
I fell the heart on me
but it kills the pain in me
I wish it fills me with life
but it takes the life from me
I heard the sound of hope
but it's far away from me
I look to the sky for help
but the sky is dark as night
I pray for morning to come
but darkness fills the cloud
like the sound of whisper
I felt the life out of me
like the wind that beats goes bye
the head that wear the crown
I felt the pain in me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 4/3/2012 12:49:00 PM
cool poem always p.d.
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Date: 4/3/2012 9:34:00 AM
Wow. That poem is quite depressing.
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