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my own favourite haiku - so far

Haiku for frangipani in bloom: nocturnal bouquet of frangipani in bloom – olfactory fruits teasing aromas adorning a young girls hair – swaying moonlit palms moths seeking nectar flutter, flower to flower – new buds at sunrise.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/1/2013 6:58:00 AM
Love your Haiku, exploring the senses. daver
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Date: 2/23/2013 11:35:00 PM
awesome haiku friend Michael.. enjoyed reading it today. Congratulations on your win. Love, maria :)
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Date: 2/22/2013 6:33:00 PM
yes, I remember this one and could see how you found it to be your favorite one. Congrats on the win for your lovely series.
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Date: 2/22/2013 1:34:00 AM
Hi congratulations, great haiku, and well deserving of a winning spot...I am hoping for more time next week for more reading and commenting xx
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Date: 2/21/2013 6:19:00 PM
Congrats on you win Michael :D wonderful haiku of yours :) - hug, yanny
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Date: 2/21/2013 6:24:00 PM
Sweet as. Thanks Yanny. :-)
Date: 2/21/2013 6:12:00 PM
Michael,Congratulations with your own favorite haiku. have yourself a nice one~ LINDA
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Date: 2/21/2013 6:23:00 PM
Loving it. Thanks Linda.
Date: 2/19/2013 10:54:00 PM
well, I really like this set!!! I can see why you used these for the contest. I probably should have chosen more wisely than I did in this contest. I think this should do really well!!
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Date: 2/21/2013 5:37:00 PM
Thanks Andrea. :-)
Date: 2/18/2013 11:44:00 PM
How strange! But there is something so compelling about those furry little guys, isn't there?
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