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My Own Existence - senryu chain x5

~~**~~ father gave me life his love fills my heart with joy my daddy is best ~*~ moms are heaven sent angels on earth mothers are love like no other ~*~ look for facts I search I research but get confused or am I confused ~*~ not my intension nor a bone of contention social convention ~*~ I used to be brash I used to be blazen bold no more I got old ~~**~~

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Date: 7/4/2015 11:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win a 7 on this beautiful verse. Hugs Eve
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Warner Baxter
Date: 7/22/2015 11:28:00 AM
Thank you so much Eve
Date: 7/4/2015 8:46:00 AM
I enjoyed this progression of life. Congrats.
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Warner Baxter
Date: 7/22/2015 11:29:00 AM
Thank you Richard, I am glad you enjoyed it
Date: 7/3/2015 10:31:00 PM
Congrats on ur winning senryu Warner!
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Warner Baxter
Date: 7/22/2015 11:29:00 AM
Thank you so much Dr. Sharma
Date: 7/3/2015 9:01:00 PM
Warner, congrats on your win! Well done! Love, Kim
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Warner Baxter
Date: 7/22/2015 11:30:00 AM
Thank you very much Kim
Date: 7/3/2015 6:49:00 PM
NICE WIN
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Warner Baxter
Date: 7/22/2015 11:31:00 AM
Thank you Skat
Date: 7/3/2015 6:27:00 PM
Warner, Congratulations on Your Own Existence Senryu win. Love LINDA
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Warner Baxter
Date: 7/22/2015 11:31:00 AM
Thank you so much Linda
Date: 7/3/2015 4:58:00 PM
I loved that last one. No more I got old!! Congrats on your win.
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Warner Baxter
Date: 7/22/2015 11:32:00 AM
Thank you so much Andrea, glad you liked it
Date: 7/3/2015 4:54:00 PM
Warner, fabulous winner!
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Warner Baxter
Date: 7/22/2015 11:27:00 AM
Thank you my friend