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My Overdose

You are a shot of morphine directly into my heart Hurting so bad at first then slowly i feel numb I no longer hurt but is this good? I no longer feel anything I'm numb to laughter and happiness, numb to the world Slowly now im fading away breathing faster and more heavily My heart stops and misses a beat like when i used to hear your voice, only different now I'm fading into nothing feeling goes first then sight , and sound next Finally my sense of smell is gone and im left with a bitter taste of despair Now all is closing in No senses, no emotion just the memory of you and as that fades away my life does to Time of death 2:14 pm, the coroner calls it I only wish i could tell him he was wrong because ive been dead for almost a year now You were my Overdose

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 8/2/2008 3:04:00 PM
this is a really good one its hott!!!!
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Date: 8/1/2008 1:42:00 PM
An emotional poem. Congratulations on your featured write. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 7/30/2008 4:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Brandon. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/28/2008 7:32:00 AM
Congratulations Brandon, on "My Overdose" being featured. Vince
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Date: 7/28/2008 6:26:00 AM
This is a very deep emotional poem - congrats on being featured
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Date: 7/28/2008 5:44:00 AM
Congratulations Brandon on this powerful poem being featured this week. Someone had a huge affect on you, to say the least. Well done. Love,Shar
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