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Mind-boggling bowing of the trees' stretching Vast beds of blossoms are overseen in adjoining Beds that were displayed in a solitary tone sparkled It was also defined where each should be developed Though the rustic garden is splendid to the sight One cannot challenge such a wonderful delight Each fashioned shadiness to convey a purpose And biding each aspect is an ongoing corpus Notwithstanding, I memorably like a kaleidoscope A rainbow of tints is everything that could hope They will show up as one, despite their variety Under one sun, the cluster is fluxed thoroughly And as each hue seeks to assert a stronghold We must cherish them all with our eyes unfold
5TH PLACE CONTEST WINNER Written: March 21, 2022 Garden Inspirations Poetry Contest Sponsored by: BJ Legros Kelley

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Date: 4/21/2022 9:33:00 PM
The image of Marigolds is so delightful. I love these flowers ! Back to you with congratulations on your win, dear Lasaad !
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Date: 4/20/2022 8:08:00 PM
A beautiful sonnet with great image of the garden. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/20/2022 6:40:00 PM
Joyful! Thank you for your submission and congratulations on your high placing win in the Garden Inspirations Poetry Contest! :) <3
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Date: 3/22/2022 5:03:00 AM
Lovely garden you have Lasaad. Blooms of joy!
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Date: 3/22/2022 2:12:00 AM
Great sonnet. oved the descriptions full of imagery and sights.
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Date: 3/21/2022 9:06:00 PM
"And as each hue seeks to assert a stronghold We must cherish them all with our eyes unfold"..... A garden with blossoms of varied hues and shapes is a delight to everyone. They display a splendid spectrum of colors ! A very lovely write dear friend !
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Date: 3/21/2022 7:23:00 PM
There’s nothing as lovely as a garden laden with trees and flowers, one could stand and stare at them for hours. You paint a wonderful picture of your outdoor garden with words Sotto. The poem is beautiful… Belle
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