My Orchestra

She can pluck on one lonely string,
or fill me with her orchestra,
when my heart plays her symphony.

Visual 3
Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 
01.01.2015
Contest: 3 BY 8 Image
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Makama Avatar
January 28, 2015 at 7:56 AM
This is an awesome and wonderful poem. Its nice spending some time here.. It feels so quality and deserving. Great pen friend
Kiser Avatar
January 20, 2015 at 1:09 PM
Oh the symphony's that the heart can play...beautifully done.
Lamoureux Avatar
January 14, 2015 at 8:58 AM
Good morning Brenda. I enjoyed reading this one again.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
January 14, 2015 at 8:16 AM
Lovely lines, Brenda...stopping by to say hi. I haven't seen you around. Dylan was asking me if you had any new poems for him. I hope you're ok...hugs, Rhonda
Smith Avatar
January 12, 2015 at 11:14 PM
Haven't seen you in a bit. Hope all is well...hugs Tim
Yvonne Avatar
January 9, 2015 at 7:16 PM
Stunning as always! love, Armand!
Lamoureux Avatar
January 9, 2015 at 5:42 PM
You have a very accomplished heart!
Meade Avatar
January 8, 2015 at 10:01 PM
Hey, I missed this gem . . . I love the music. Well done dear friend.
Roper Avatar
January 8, 2015 at 4:39 PM
Brenda, wonderful write in just a few words. I assume you are talking about a child, when you love that person, whatever noise they make it is like music to your ears. To see their smile when they have accomplished something that is worth more than anything 7
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 6:54 AM
Beautiful Brenda.. :) I have one like this too but unfortunately the contest has been closed before i could ever enter it.. :)!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 6:58 AM
this could have been my entry : Hark! Hark! I hear string and brass sigh... thrum! thrum! tom-tom in whirlpool beats/// they flood in notes of glee, I cry!.. :D!
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 2:57 AM
Your poem became the melody of the floating instruments. Lovely entry Brenda! It is sure to do well.
Mcdaid Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 1:23 AM
lly love how this sang to me brenda
Strauss Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 9:18 PM
I so feel the music on this write! :)
Andresen Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 1:26 PM
- Lovely symphony for the visual 3, dear Brenda - I wish you luck in the contest! - // Anne-Lise :)
Guzzi Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 7:41 PM
I enjoyed reading your work this evening. Light & Love
Dietrich Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 2:25 PM
this one is FANTASTICO!! one of my favorites I saw done for this contest. and sure, i will kiss snickers for you!
Allison Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 12:51 PM
love the romance you have conjured up here - great take on the theme - good luck:-) Hugs jan xx
Hamilton Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 11:17 AM
brilliant take on theme Brenda gl in contest hugs
Kendrick Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 7:48 AM
Reads like a winner..Way to go..Words are music to our ears..Thanks for stopping by.Sara
Manassian Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 2:15 AM
Sweet.....tender....I LIKE IT, BRENDA. Good luck.
Ebbs Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 10:46 PM
Cute, good luck with the contest :)
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