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Threw my eyes i see things that are being done around me. I hear things that are being said. Do i really see? Do i really hear? Life is so many things to so many people. No one person can tell another about life. What is life? The things you do, the things you say are the stepping stones of how your life is developing. Life is a cycle. It can end at any moment. God gives you life and he can take it away. We start this life knowing but not knowing. Our teachers, our pears,our friends,our family, our world. They teach us. What does this world and all these people teach us. They teach us: LOVE, CAREING, HATE, PAIN, DECEPTION, AND MORE.......... To a certain degree we can control partially these things we choose to build our life on. We choose to HATE someone or something. We choose to LOVE some one or something. We choose to be DECEPTIVE against another. We choose to CARE for someone or something. We choose to let someone or something cause us pain. We choose to inflict pain upon someone else. We choose these things to do at some point in our lives because we are weak. We cant control our lives alone. We need help. At some point in our life no matter wather you are rich or poor. We can admit for just a moment that we are lost and need guidence. From who???? Every one has there own beliefs. Mine is GOD.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/16/2010 12:22:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. an impressive and creative write..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/16/2010 11:18:00 AM
I am so pleased to have been able to read your poetry this morning Sandy. Have a wonderful day and welcome to PoetrySoup.. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/16/2010 11:00:00 AM
A NICE WRITE, ENJOYED. . .P.D.
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