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My On-Leave Heart

He does not see the tears that fall Lonely and silently on the pillow The endless nights tossing and turning Waking up in search of him He doesnt hear the prayers to God Spoken every night for him Pleading to keep him safe and sound To give him strength and courage He does not know about the thoughts So many each day,dedicated to him Wishing he could sense them And the love that grows each day He does not feel the kisses The ones being sent each night Hoping they might reach him To cure the bruises of his loneliness

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/5/2010 1:48:00 AM
Lovely write!
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Date: 11/28/2010 4:18:00 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Annabel. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/28/2010 3:34:00 AM
This is truly something. I dig this a lot. I was in the shoes of the character in this piece a few times over. There are some who will never grasp how good they had it. Until you're gone...beautiful & kinda heart-breaking piece.
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