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I recall driving past the place I used to live; it triggered a flood of old memories. Oh, I just had to drive back there! And with the thoroughness of an obsessively determined detective, I did discover relics of the past. Surroundings familiar though many years have passed I broadly smiled as I waxed reflective; old neighbors recalled with fondness. I sat, wondering where life has taken them; lost in a deep reverie. Fine stardust of nostalgia, I sieved. Haunting ghosts of yesteryear I fondly relived! Lawn I blew dandelion seeds every... so often, kept in superb care. Expanded, narrowness... of pathway in the backyard; like a detective, walking my old stomping grounds. Back, at last. Submitted for... A Little Memory - My Invented Form - Poetry Contest (Winner: 1st Place) Sponsored by: Constance La France Rhyme Pattern ABCDEF FEDCBA ABCDEF Syllables are 12/10/8/6/12/10 12/10/8/6/12/10 12/10/8/6/12/10 Date written: 01/09/2021

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Date: 1/21/2021 3:41:00 AM
Sometimes it is good to go back and actually walk the old paths. Congrats on your winner. Sara
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/21/2021 3:44:00 AM
Taking a nostalgic trip back to the past is always a good thing. Thank you very much, Sara:-)
Date: 1/19/2021 12:01:00 PM
Edward, congratulations on your win in my contest, A Little Memory using my invented Rhyme form, excellent poem, I love it and the quote too _Constance
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Date: 1/19/2021 12:25:00 PM
Thank you very much for my placement, Constance:-) Most obliged.
Date: 1/10/2021 7:03:00 AM
Reminiscing in treasured memories--beautifully done, Edward, in this hard to execute form.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/10/2021 12:20:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Vijay:-)
Date: 1/9/2021 5:11:00 PM
A wonderful poem filled with a joyful sense of nostalgia. Great job!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/9/2021 5:16:00 PM
Thank you so much, Caren:-)

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