My Old Cat

My old cat lies beside me on the sofa asleep
She is sleeping soundly but opens an eye to peep
She is resting her weary old bones tonight
She peacefully sleeps her coat shines in the light

She can’t move quick enough to catch her prey
She used to be really fast back in her day
Now she just watches and thinks about sleep
An appointment with the sofa to keep

Shan used to be a kitten a long time ago
It’s hard to remember because now she is slow
Her hearing is going her eyes are failing too
It may get much worse but what can you do?

She will be looked after well in her dotage years
I will feed and nurture her dispel any fears
My old cat Shan is lovely I don’t want her to go
Shan is eighteen years old now and I love her so
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
October 28, 2009 at 9:07 AM
It is a brighter day for me today after reading your wonderful poetry. I wish you a wonderful day filled with love and inspiration Pamela. Love, Carol
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October 28, 2009 at 7:57 AM
What a tender and sweet poem, our animal friends can be a part of who we are are compassionate people. Nicely done, ...I hope she has many more years with you. ~ Carrie
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October 27, 2009 at 10:57 PM
Wow, what a tribute to your old cat Shan, Pam! I always had cats before, but here people are different and some landlords won't like pets. But I am sute that one day I will have a cat again. But since some months now I am feeding my neighbours cat...Thank you for your comments....Gert
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October 27, 2009 at 8:02 PM
How cute and lovely, Pam.. I have a new cat named Gabriel now .. he is a blast and my elder cat named Bronco died last year.. this brought back the many things he used to do and how much fun felines are... thankxx for putting it in this excellent verse to share with all of us on PS... Linda-Marie
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October 27, 2009 at 7:52 PM
What a beautiful love for your cat. I know how you fell. I have one that is 13. She started looking fragile for awhile. Now, we bring her in for feeding and she has gained weight again. The other cats started to run her off from the food. Being allergic to cats and dogs, I have to keep them outside. But I often sit on the deck in the ole rocker and one by one they come over to be pet. Callie and I are old friends. And I love her a lot, too. I enjoyed your poem. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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October 27, 2009 at 7:10 PM
I love your affection for your cat, I have one of my own, a Manx cat, he is a joy to me. I raised him from a kitten. Amazing, how attached to an animal we humans can get. Smile! Good write, Sincerely, Love, Moses
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October 27, 2009 at 1:04 PM
They become a part of us and us them. Keep writing. Sara
Fraser Avatar
October 27, 2009 at 12:50 PM
Aww, its sad when our pets become a shadow of themselves, as we end up >> nice poem >> James
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