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My Oblivion

My love, shaken to its foundations, what I thought was immortal, what i thought was eternal. My mind, drowning, falling, running, And before me, echoes of our life, serenity, of my downward spiral. So lost are my desires, love pushed to oblivion, my failers. A union in ruin, where is my adversity, where is my forgivness, Is this the moment, the longing, after all this time, could there be love. the past must be gone, forever This is, my life in your hands, these words, of my heart are yours, my inspiration, my sacrifice, for my soul, still calls your name.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 7/16/2012 4:08:00 AM
John, , stopping by to say good night~PD
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Date: 3/22/2012 7:44:00 PM
I do understand what you are saying in this. I am feeling your pain and hope that healing will come.
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Date: 1/12/2012 8:27:00 PM
I sense the sadness of a loss john, a difficult thing to come to terms with. I know your faith will see you through and give the comfort you badly need. Luv, Lizzie
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Date: 12/16/2011 2:02:00 PM
I appreciate all your comments John Aaron. Keep up all the writing!
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Date: 12/16/2011 11:56:00 AM
As always beautifully written and from your heart and soul. Your poems are unequaled. Condolences for your loss my friend.
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Date: 12/15/2011 3:27:00 PM
John, you my friend are the most loving and inspirational man ,unequalled solace to many . Your poems are a treasure to me and many more here on soup. Anne
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Date: 12/15/2011 2:56:00 AM
Emotive and cleansing...HE KNEW this poem before it came to LIFE. Remember we will all stand before Him in our naked shame. He will throw our dirty laundry to the depths of the seas and wrap His eternal loving arms around YOU and yours.
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john aaron green
Date: 12/15/2011 10:32:00 AM
thank you kind friend,,,you have given me hope,,and strength.....
Date: 12/13/2011 10:42:00 PM
Wow John! This is very heartfelt...Ask and ye shall be forgiven.The love of the Lords light shines on all who are humbled in life.I pray that he may always give you inspiration.
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john aaron green
Date: 12/14/2011 4:22:00 PM
thanks dan,,,,love you comments...
Date: 12/13/2011 7:27:00 PM
I hope you rekindle what was lost, john. Sounds like you are a very sensitive guy. Hopefully a devoted one as well! Heartfelt poem.
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Date: 12/13/2011 5:32:00 PM
Sweet you are John, can't think what I'd do without you. Hugs!
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Date: 12/13/2011 12:33:00 PM
what a lovely poem. thank you for sharing
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Date: 12/13/2011 11:36:00 AM
I keep falling, getting up and unfortunately repeating the same old. I'm learning but being human, it is so hard. The downward spiral holds captive but with His strength I hope to overcome. Thanks for posting dear friend. You always give food for thought!
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Date: 12/13/2011 9:33:00 AM
The same name I call, especially when I fall- John, sometime I'm lost in the confusion on forgiveness. I don't have the same mentality others do. I seek deeper, and this new me stays away from the stains and longing of the world, I really am an un-social person. In my little box I have this world called the soup. Maybe it inspires me some, I can't corporate with this ruined society, I ask God, however to help me with my lack of forgiveness, and to help me restore my adversity. Thank you,..p.d
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Date: 12/13/2011 9:36:00 AM
I wanted to comment more... But, I used up all my characters... Prayers are good.... Reforming is good
Date: 12/13/2011 9:20:00 AM
when all you feared,,comes upon you,,and your life is open,,,please remember us in your prayers....
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