Constance La France Poet Kimo

My Number Is Three

 
Father does not see the mournful sad tears,
that fall on his mossy tomb . . .

Just three glistening tears.


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September 16, 2014


Poetry/Kimo/My Number Is Three
Copyright Protected, ID 09-600-969-16
All Rights Reserved, 2014, Constance La France


Path Number 3 - February 1

Entered into the Standard contest, What is My Number, 
sponsor Andrea Dietrich, Judged 2014

Seventh Place

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Debbie Duncan October 14, 2015 at 3:12 AM I really like this one, and you placed with it too :)

Sara Kendrick March 21, 2015 at 7:29 AM Congrats on your winning work..Thanks for dropping by..Yes, I love the flowers but I am no longer able to work them like I once did..Sara

Paul Callus October 7, 2014 at 12:39 PM Well done Constance; sad and touching but a joy to read. Congrats on your win. // paul Constance La France October 21, 2014 at 5:22 PM Thanks so much Paul ~~

Maurice Yvonne October 4, 2014 at 9:51 AM A touching piece that jettisons our hearts to link with yours. I am going to fav your kimo to keep it close to me. Congratulations. Constance La France October 21, 2014 at 5:25 PM Maurice thank you for your support, so much appreciated ~~

Brenda Meier-Hans October 4, 2014 at 8:31 AM Congratulations on your win with this heartbreaking poem. Constance La France October 21, 2014 at 5:26 PM Thank you Brenda for your kind words, I really miss my father so much, it is hard to fathom that he is gone ~~

Barbara Gorelick October 4, 2014 at 7:49 AM three tears..how lovely. Congrats. BG Constance La France October 21, 2014 at 5:26 PM Thank you Barbara ~~

Jan Allison October 4, 2014 at 7:29 AM Dropping back with my congratulations :-) Hugs Jan xx Constance La France October 21, 2014 at 5:27 PM Thanks

Dr.Ram Mehta October 4, 2014 at 6:24 AM As always, touchy and heartfelt write, constance, congrats Constance La France October 21, 2014 at 5:28 PM TU Ram

Andrea Dietrich October 4, 2014 at 2:05 AM Congratulations for your win, Constance. A beautiful heartfelt poem, as all your poems are. Constance La France October 21, 2014 at 5:29 PM Thank you so much Andrea for your kindness ~~

Jack Horne September 29, 2014 at 10:52 AM yes, I agree with Tim - a first place winner, for sure Constance La France October 21, 2014 at 5:34 PM Thanks Jack, hope you are well ~~

Tim Ryerson September 22, 2014 at 6:11 PM WOW Constance - I think we have a winner here... Constance La France September 27, 2014 at 6:12 PM Thanks so much Tim for your support ~~

Richard Lamoureux September 20, 2014 at 9:53 AM I will have to check out this contest. I think you have captured the essence with your three tears. Constance La France September 27, 2014 at 6:13 PM Thanks Richard, I hope I did the contest correctly ~~

Jan Allison September 16, 2014 at 4:31 PM Such a heartfelt sad write. I hope it does well for you in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx Constance La France September 27, 2014 at 6:13 PM Thank You Jan, for your encouragement and well wishes ~~