My never forgotten lady

There's something in the way you carry yourself, continuously dropping a heavy feeling in my soul, draining the least leaving a yearn like I can't live without you, an absolute void in my whole, leaving void in my own sense, everyday wonders pouring heavily on my mind, wonder why me, so much weight in your presence, my presence fail to  contain long, 

your time taken features, the seduction in your texture, breathing gaps in your smile, I'm forever left with bullet holes on mind, leaking everywhere, with your relentless heaven touches and embraces, wonder why, my mind keep hypnotic to your horizon, my feeling projecting everything you resemble, 

running in circles trying to catch the beauty in your aura, like a dog chasing its tail, forever returning exhausted without sense clear of what are you, reaching climax of my wonders, long have I been trying to tour your beautiful being, my mind navigation run low in energy, this adventure to your gists, drains the least God trusted in me, 

so lost in trying, trying to understand what's beyond my level of understanding, thought heaven gates welcomed me, when the power of your beauty fed my eyes with absolute absenteeism  of reactions, some weakling voice in me whispered " you are blessed" wonder if this how blessings looks like,

wondering what honor heaven owed me, to be embraced in your radar,  still I carry effects of our first encounter to my every smiling moment, wondering if experiences like you still offered by heaven on earth, my never forgotten lady
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Date: 10/15/2024 10:26:00 PM
Well put! Apologies for the other comment that was left about rhyme - for some reason it duplicated from another poem I had left a comment on. In addition - I think you hit the nail on the head, we are shaped by what we live through whether we are conscious of it or not. I look forward to seeing what's next from you! - Anna
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Date: 10/15/2024 9:14:00 PM
I would love to know the story behind this - it is haunting. In the same breath, however, I believe the impact comes from the unknown. Well done on such an impact in so few words! - Anna x
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Date: 10/15/2024 9:40:00 PM
I believe when they say every human is unique in their own way, some human encounter and experiences coz of their uniqueness makes you to still be stuck to such experiences, so overwhelming and unforgettable
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