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My Neighbor's Garden

An unkempt garden
                 Alive with color and charm
                 I’m full of envy

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 3/1/2019 11:26:00 AM

I am jealous of you as you have daffodils in your garden. Love.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/25/2019 8:35:00 PM

As long as you haven't turned 'green.' (LOL). Gotta save the 'green' for the 'thumb!' :) gw

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2019 12:41:00 PM

I envy a neighbor of mine too who has this kind of garden. It's wild with flowers of all kinds. Nicely done. Wish I had thought to do a simple style like this. I see the chancea this contest is now vanished.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/19/2019 2:54:00 PM

barbara, lovely colors and blooms enchant me... i'm sure your garden is so pretty like this senryu; no need to be jealous of someone else's yard!...huggs

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 2/18/2019 6:02:00 PM

I used to know a Dutch lady who had an unkempt garden of mixed flowers which reminded me of some of Monet's paintings, but the vegetable part was nicely ordered. Thanks for stopping by and your appreciated complement. / M

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/18/2019 4:32:00 PM

Even an "unkempt garden" fills with color, BG. Maybe it's time to go out and plant a few flowers of your own. A lovely senryu, perhaps an entry for the garden contest. Hugs, Carolyn

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