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                                               my need
                                                                                to hold you grows stronger . .

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                            Temptation - Sexy Piano

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                       - oh, to touch you -

                   circle around your melody
                 not once, but many many times

                  just to feel your fingers
                        laced inside of mine

                   i crave you

                      the brush of your lips,
                             the taste of your kiss,
                   the movement of your skin

                                    my need

                       . . to feel you this close
                     continues to grow




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 a passionate little scribble

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 9/9/2019 10:18:00 AM
This is a masterpiece. Your soul is palpable here, a great dish of lines my wonderful friend.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/9/2019 11:59:00 AM
Thank you Funom. Such a sweet thing to say, about me and my poetry. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy
Date: 7/24/2019 3:03:00 PM
I enjoyed retreading this one and the playful reactions to your poem.
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Date: 7/24/2019 9:46:00 PM
It seems some thoughts here in the comments are more playful than this poem. The mood lingers!! Thank you Rick. :) Brandy
Date: 7/24/2019 7:29:00 AM
You set Poetry Soup on fire with these sensuous words my friend, Brandy..passion in every breath!
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/24/2019 1:31:00 PM
Oh my!!! Thank you Vijay. Just something a little playful and passionate touching the page. Your thoughts bring a smile and a blush at the same time. :) Brandy
Date: 7/21/2019 5:37:00 PM
Hello Brandy Nicole, oh...I sense that you are in love. have a nice evening my friend.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/21/2019 6:28:00 PM
Darlene, love is an emotion that always surrounds my heart. I appreciate you and your thoughts. My best to you. :) Brandy
Date: 7/14/2019 4:37:00 AM
Damn, a real sensual and tender poem... you say only a little, but say so much...
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/15/2019 7:27:00 AM
Perhaps she will.
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 7/15/2019 12:59:00 AM
I wish my wife did!
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/14/2019 2:02:00 PM
Thank you Silent One. Sometimes, less is more. Truth. :) Brandy
Date: 7/13/2019 11:13:00 PM
True love, its needs, its scribbling. Wish I could scribble like you.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/14/2019 2:00:00 PM
You are so sweet Victor. Such a wonderful thing to say. I am just me. You write so beautifully. :) I appreciate you and your thoughts. ~ Brandy
Date: 7/13/2019 9:15:00 PM
How do I love thee? Let me count the ways!
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/15/2019 4:12:00 PM
I am just me. :)
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 7/15/2019 7:57:00 AM
Modest too. Make that 36.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/15/2019 7:27:00 AM
Intoxicated with me?? No way!! Must be the poetry. :) And the counting continues, I see.
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 7/14/2019 10:39:00 PM
I can't help it. I'm intoxicated with Brandy! Make that 35.
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Son of Spock
Date: 7/14/2019 7:35:00 PM
Down boy! Lay off the Foster's dude
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/14/2019 1:58:00 PM
Hmm, I wonder how far the counting goes?? :)
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 7/14/2019 1:55:00 AM
I'm up to 34...and counting.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/13/2019 9:28:00 PM
Ahhh, is that so?? I am waiting. Thank you Keith. :) Brandy
Date: 7/13/2019 12:11:00 PM
You're a true romantic Brandy. Lust is for losers. Sensuality ignited by romance (true love) wins every time. Nice scribble
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/13/2019 1:21:00 PM
Exactly, true love always wins. :) Thank you Son of Spock. I am just being me, writing from the heart. ~ Brandy
Date: 7/13/2019 7:12:00 AM
'I love the melody of passion' in your words Brandy... Lovely write
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/13/2019 1:19:00 PM
Yes, there is a sweet melody within. Thank you Joseph for your kind words. :) Brandy
Date: 7/13/2019 5:05:00 AM
Tenderly romantic dear Brandy! Lucky the one who gets such attention!
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/13/2019 1:18:00 PM
So kind of you to say. I am just me. Thank you Demetrios for your thoughts. ~ Brandy
Date: 7/13/2019 12:08:00 AM
I'd happily swim around my fish bowl...and blow bubbles while admiring you with all of my heart...if I was a little gold fishy you'd be the blessing of my eyes... hoping one day to love you...that's the kind of passion you'd enchant with these poetry nuggets...
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Date: 7/13/2019 1:16:00 PM
Oh my!!! Such a playful comment. Thank you Arturo for reading this passionate scribble again and leaving your thoughts upon it. Your words bring a smile. :) Brandy
Date: 7/12/2019 2:52:00 PM
Beautiful words so nicely placed together. Seems your in love eh? :)
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/12/2019 3:07:00 PM
Thank you Edward. Love lingers within my heart. I appreciate your kind words. :) Brandy
Date: 7/12/2019 11:42:00 AM
A beautifully penned poem, B. Your sensuality and passion are oozing across the parchment and leaving me breathless. All my best to you my dear friend. John
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/12/2019 2:06:00 PM
Thank you John. Such a wonderful thing to say. Breathless are moments in love and passion. I appreciate you and your thoughts. My best to you. :) Brandy
Date: 7/12/2019 7:37:00 AM
Passionate indeed! A slice of heavenly delight. Hugs Rick.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/12/2019 2:04:00 PM
The need to be close lingers. Thank you Rick for reading this playful poem filled with passion. :) Brandy
Date: 7/12/2019 7:03:00 AM
You take me on a journey...Whatever it is it's magic... Especially, these love poems...Love it...
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/12/2019 1:33:00 PM
There is magic in love. Your thoughts are always appreciated Arturo. Keep smiling my dear friend. :) Brandy