My Mystical Black Rose

Did I tell you the story of my mystical black rose? Well let me In my troubled nights I took comfort in the scenery of my old window One tiny sparkle always shone its way through the darkness, embracing my sorrow Till the night I decided to visit my sorrow's whisker in the belly of midnight I wrestled through the bushes sacrificing my blood on the alter of their sharp leaves and thorns Till my eyes was paralyzed on this black rose that collected drops of dew in its petals and lightened them with the moonlight; that mysterious sparkle now lay bare in my eyes and in my reach for the first time. I'd never seen black so beautiful, but as much as I wanted to pluck it for myself my heart wouldn't let me, for I was not in love with just a black rose but everything else that made it sparkle my sorrows away; the moon and the dew. As I left with doubt clouding my mind, I saw its sparkling drops trickle down its petals. Can a rose cry? For I live now never to see it sparkle again ever since that night. I'm different now, beyond need of sparkles for my nights but I always walk to that old window waiting for my mystical black rose to reach my heart again. Even though I might see myself a gray haired man starring in my old window, I'll wait, just patiently wait, for my black rose to come alive again. And this time, just this time I will not think twice.
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Date: 2/19/2016 12:56:00 AM
Awe, Ezer,, I was reading your comments below... Thank you for the reply to my comment, it's very charming. LINDA
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Date: 2/19/2016 1:25:00 AM
You harvested those words from me. So you deserve it Linda.
Date: 2/16/2016 8:10:00 PM
enjoying this poem once again, Your poem is lovely. I super love the title. LINDA
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Ezer Agyin
Date: 2/18/2016 11:49:00 PM
I'm starting to see the beauty my finger tips carry more through your eyes. I appreciate the time. On my heart you've earned a stripe.
Date: 9/27/2015 5:31:00 PM
"I'd never seen black so beautiful..." Love that line.
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Ezer Agyin
Date: 2/18/2016 11:46:00 PM
I'm glad that line touched you. I pray I can sketch many of those aiming your direction. Thanks Laura
Date: 8/26/2015 1:09:00 PM
Ebenezer, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Ezer Agyin
Date: 9/26/2015 4:15:00 PM
I am the lucky one. Thank you Linda
Date: 8/24/2015 2:44:00 PM
Hey Even, a very warm welcome to Poetry Soup! This is a great poem full of imagery and very well written. I look forward to reading more from you. There are so many wonderful poets here and you will fit right in with us. It is also a great place to learn and grow in our wonderful art form. Be Blessed, Neva
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Ezer Agyin
Date: 9/26/2015 4:14:00 PM
looking forward to the growing... Thanks for the encouragement and welcoming message Neva
Date: 8/23/2015 11:04:00 PM
Your poem's beautiful Ebenezer, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 9/26/2015 4:12:00 PM
I appreciate your time Skat. I'll be the best friend i can.
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