My Mother's Eyes

If I'd not known my mother's eyes
Perhaps the sky would hold more blue
If I'd not seen my mother smile
Perhaps the sunrise on the hill, 
would shine in gold... in bolder hues

If I had never felt her touch,
while brushing tears beneath my lash
with gentle hands, that tucked a curl, behind my ears,
those simple tasks
Perhaps the softness of the breeze
Would be a soothing, more gentle....pleasing
Or sprinkled raindrops more refreshing...

If I had never felt her arms enfold me
Perhaps the sun would be more warming

If I had never heard her voice
the softness of her gentle voice
the hum of comfort in the night 
the lullaby that spoke of love
Perhaps the song of nightingales 
Or whispered coos when evening calls
Would sound more clear
and sweeter to my wanting ear

But as it is......her love was all
the love that filled me to the brim
was not a whim, nor false recall 
As beautiful as nature is,
 it does fall short...in what was then
Such loveliness cannot compare






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For PD's Mother's Day Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Oyewole Avatar
May 18, 2013 at 9:40 AM
Very nicely done. Congrats on your win. AO
Lamoureux Avatar
May 17, 2013 at 7:17 AM
This is so beautiful! Congratulations.
A   Avatar
May 16, 2013 at 10:12 PM
CONGRATULATIONS,CARRIE ! Thank you for the nice and wonderful heartfelt poem about mom's. ~LOVE~ Linda
Brown Avatar
May 21, 2010 at 5:19 AM
Congratulations on your win Carrie in the contest "Mother" sponsored by A Rambling Poet. Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
May 9, 2010 at 5:16 PM
Congratulations Carrie on your poem's success in the competition. Agape, Moses
Johnson Avatar
May 8, 2010 at 10:32 PM
Congratulations Carrie. This is lovely. Love,Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
May 8, 2010 at 9:01 PM
Congrats Carrie on your winning poem in the Mother contest ...with thhis "beauty" .. a special win to enjoy and a Happy Mother's Day too..luv.. Linda-Marie..
Foster Avatar
May 5, 2010 at 12:19 AM
I have not used the word 'stupendous' before but in this instance nothing else fits. Both in the use of your words and the love that shines through. A beautiful poem Carrie well done....Margaret
K. Avatar
May 3, 2010 at 3:27 AM
Such a touching tribute to your mom, Carrie :) I'm sure this is in the winner's list yet again :)
Flach Avatar
May 2, 2010 at 6:30 PM
Lovely. You are one talented lady. Thanks for sharing.
Dietrich Avatar
May 2, 2010 at 6:25 PM
carrie, you could write a huge book of all your poems and I would stay enthralled till the end of them! LIke with this. LUv, andrea
Mehta Avatar
May 2, 2010 at 6:01 PM
Good luck in the contest
A  Avatar
May 2, 2010 at 3:36 PM
Well done. Good luck in the contest, thanks for the write,,IRMA
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