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My Mother's Blue Dress

My Mother's Blue Dress tucked in a box, Away from the time on a clock. She was once young and beautiful, Her life was to be perfect and joyful. My Mother's Blue Dress so neatly packed, It has never been unwrapped. A wedding that never happened, Now fifty years later the blue dress should be blackened. Years come and years go, All she can do is dream of tomorrow. 12/24/2019

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Date: 12/26/2019 2:55:00 PM
a poignant write...you make the dress come to life...i could see it in the box, awaiting it's chance to be worn... nice penning...happy new year to you Paula :) hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/26/2019 5:53:00 PM
Thank you for reading & writing. I love to hear from other writers. Happy New Year 2020..............
Date: 12/26/2019 2:49:00 PM
I have seen this dress... it is still lovely in the box, time does not touch dreams the same, as other things. Hugs... so well written. I love your stories and your pros... Ann
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/26/2019 5:52:00 PM
You are right, "time does not touch dreams the same, as other things." Glad you like it. Thanks for writing.
Date: 12/25/2019 11:35:00 PM
Very well penned. Liked it. God bless you.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/26/2019 9:35:00 AM
Thanks for your kind words. I love to hear from other writers......
Date: 12/24/2019 10:13:00 PM
Wow. This one is a heart jerker.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/26/2019 9:34:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like it................

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