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My Morning Alarm

My son rises each morning and easily awakes; He runs into my room and gives me a hardy shake. There is no sleepiness in the sound of his excited voice; The things that he says to me make me smile; I have no choice; “Dad, Count Dooku has light sabers of both red and green!” Or, “The triceratops is the funniest dinosaur I’ve ever seen!” Or, “The polecat is the same animal as the skunk.” Or, “I wish I could take a shower under an elephant trunk.” There was, “Dad, I think orange is the color that I now like the best.” And, “Can we go outside today to look for a treasure chest.” One morning he said, “You know, mealworms can really stink.” Once it was, “Dad, I saw a tarantula, swimming in our sink.” Sometimes he tries to whisper, but he hasn’t mastered the technique yet; I’ve told him not to shake so hard, but often he forgets. Some people use an alarm clock or a rooster to help them rise; But me? I have my bubbly son to help open up my eyes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/21/2011 3:53:00 PM
This makes me smile and laugh....exactly how it is when our grandkids come for a overnight visit...there is excitement in everything, from the minute we are up at the crack of dawn!!
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Date: 3/21/2011 10:28:00 AM
absolutely wonderful, best kind of alarm clock
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Date: 3/21/2011 9:20:00 AM
Gosh, he sounds like such a bright and entertaining boy, Joe. I'd gladly trade in my annoying alarm clock for your "bubbly son." You had me smiling throughout the poem. VERY nice! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/21/2011 8:45:00 AM
Joe, what a joy to have your own unique alarm clock, hopefully he keeps on waking his dad with a smile even if he hasn't mastered the whispering technique yet :) loads of smiles this evening while reading this ~ WNN
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Date: 3/21/2011 8:40:00 AM
A child's curiosity is beautiful (yet tiring!).
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Date: 3/21/2011 8:28:00 AM
Absolutely flattering, I have two boys of my own and my 3 year old deffinatley beat waking to an alarm clock. great write Joe.... Love, Randa
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