J. Dover Poet Tanka

My Moonlight Dream

Illuminated
His face glows silvery-blue
And now, he smiles
His black hair waves in the wind
But I know he is not mine

I've been enlightened
As my face glows with pleasure
And now, I can smile
My blonde hair waves in the wind
For my dream came true tonight

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Grace Williams December 9, 2011 at 9:42 PM I really like how your Tankas fit together. They make a nice comparison and conjure up a story. Good job

Carol Sunshine Brown December 6, 2011 at 11:12 AM Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Moonlight Dreams" contest J. Love, Carol

Matthew Anish December 6, 2011 at 7:35 AM Pretty tankas here. I gues you get the black haired one in the second tanka? Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Audrey Haick December 4, 2011 at 2:49 PM Congratulations on a very fine win, J. Dover. Enjoyed! Annalise

Bob Quigley December 4, 2011 at 9:38 AM Well written Ms Dover. Congratulations

Lori Lucas Mcclure November 27, 2011 at 11:36 AM wonderful write! enjoyed the read!