My Moon - Shine Bright

You are my moon - shine bright
The reflection of the Sun Jesus Christ
You walk in the way of the Lord
So in His love, His grace He afford

Your passion like celestial streams
Wash over my brittle thirsty dreams
With your love my dried up being drench
Till this burning fire within me is quenched

Like the river needs the water to get along
So my heart needs your love to beat strong
I am waiting patiently, my breath held, to exhale
Waiting to be swept up by loves blistering gale

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 9/23/2011 2:01:00 AM
Such beautiful artistry of words for your expression of faith Joy. Marvellous write! May God shower peace and blessings upon you and your loved ones, Taha.
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Date: 1/12/2011 10:33:00 AM
Joy, a gem indeed, really beautiful, love Wilma
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Date: 1/11/2011 9:43:00 PM
Hi, there, Joy. A sweet write from you. God bless! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/2/2011 3:55:00 PM
Audrey has a crystal ball, and I have trust in her readings, so I'll just second what she calls. Beautiful write, Happy new year!
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Date: 12/29/2010 1:34:00 PM
Wow!!! June this is sooo beautiful! Makes my eyes shine! His heart will melt when he reads this and lost for words he will be, I bet! Breathe deeply your day comes on the wings of angels soon, dear Sister! Hope Christmas was great. I know you missed him..Yet, tomorrow comes dear with beautiful gifts for two beautiful people! Happy New Year! Love always, Audrey
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Date: 12/27/2010 9:40:00 AM
such a beautiful piece to have went unread. well it's not in that catagory any more. it was read by a friend and her friend liked it. and he would like to send to her his holiday greetings and love. john
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