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My Mirror Looking Back

the years have added
to my patina in ways
that were not pre-approved

they crept up
one saggy whimper
one tiny wrinkle at a time

sly and sneaky
perfidious and insidious 
emphatically inclined

till one day barely recognizable
the years took their toll
adding much to my patina



AP: 3rd place 2023, Honorable Mention 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Daniel Avatar
November 20, 2022 at 4:25 AM
So true, Line:)
Gauthier Avatar
November 20, 2022 at 6:33 AM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Jo ~
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