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My Mirror Grinned

My mirror grinned at my first grey With rearing youth, it’s my first fray Disturbed, with care I plucked that bane Next day to find one more, again I cried and sighed and went astray That’s how began my darkest day With whitest hair and day by day At deepening my fear and pain My mirror grinned With no concern at my dismay Went on my hair, to well betray With more and more albescent strains; Until one day remarked Miss Jane I looked smarter with that new grey! My mirror grinned

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/4/2012 12:49:00 PM
Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Mydavolu. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/12/2011 9:38:00 AM
Congratulations Mydavolu on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Mydavolu Venkatasesha Sathyanarayana
Date: 9/12/2011 12:43:00 PM
thank you so much dear Carol.
Date: 8/8/2011 1:27:00 AM
Great write; made me grin. At least you have hair.
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Mydavolu Venkatasesha Sathyanarayana
Date: 8/8/2011 3:13:00 AM
Thank you so much John.
Date: 8/7/2011 9:10:00 PM
beautiful Rondeau, mydavolu
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Mydavolu Venkatasesha Sathyanarayana
Date: 8/8/2011 3:12:00 AM
Thank you Dr.Ram Mehta ji.
Date: 8/7/2011 1:58:00 PM
Terrific write know the feeling all too well love the sense of humor...with love...old Jack
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Mydavolu Venkatasesha Sathyanarayana
Date: 8/7/2011 1:59:00 PM
Thank you very much Jack. I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 8/7/2011 1:47:00 PM
Nice smiler! You got my mirror grinnin' too... thanks :)
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Mydavolu Venkatasesha Sathyanarayana
Date: 8/7/2011 2:00:00 PM
Thank you Nancy so much for your comment.

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