My Mirror Grinned

My mirror grinned at my first grey
With rearing youth, it’s my first fray
Disturbed, with care I plucked that bane
Next day to find one more, again
I cried and sighed and went astray

That’s how began my darkest day
With whitest hair and day by day
At deepening my fear and pain
My mirror grinned

With no concern at my dismay
Went on my hair, to well betray
With more and more albescent strains;
Until one day remarked Miss Jane
I looked smarter with that new grey!
My mirror grinned
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Brown Avatar
January 4, 2012 at 12:49 PM
Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Mydavolu. Love, Carol
Brown Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 9:38 AM
Congratulations Mydavolu on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
Sathyanarayana Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 12:43 PM
thank you so much dear Carol.
Smith Avatar
August 8, 2011 at 1:27 AM
Great write; made me grin. At least you have hair.
Sathyanarayana Avatar
August 8, 2011 at 3:13 AM
Thank you so much John.
Mehta Avatar
August 7, 2011 at 9:10 PM
beautiful Rondeau, mydavolu
Sathyanarayana Avatar
August 8, 2011 at 3:12 AM
Thank you Dr.Ram Mehta ji.
Ross Jr. Avatar
August 7, 2011 at 1:58 PM
Terrific write know the feeling all too well love the sense of humor...with love...old Jack
Sathyanarayana Avatar
August 7, 2011 at 1:59 PM
Thank you very much Jack. I am happy you liked this one.
Jones Avatar
August 7, 2011 at 1:47 PM
Nice smiler! You got my mirror grinnin' too... thanks :)
Sathyanarayana Avatar
August 7, 2011 at 2:00 PM
Thank you Nancy so much for your comment.
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