Notes About The Poem
For Trimeric poetry contest sponsored by Janice Canerdy
iambic tetrameter. The rhyme scheme should be as follows: a b a b B c c A d d B e e.
My Mind Vacation TRI
I've gone away into my mind
Where angels dance into the night
Where all my worries, left behind
Where nothings wrong and all is right
Where angels dance into the night
To music only heaven knows
With whispered words of love, said low
Where all my worries, left behind
There's moonshine, twilights’ sweet surprise
There are hellos but no goodbyes
Where nothings wrong and all is right
Until to life I must arrive
I am refreshed, I am revived
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