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For Trimeric poetry contest sponsored by Janice Canerdy iambic tetrameter. The rhyme scheme should be as follows: a b a b B c c A d d B e e.

My Mind Vacation TRI



I've gone away into my mind
Where angels dance into the night
Where all my worries, left behind
Where nothings wrong and all is right

Where angels dance into the night
To music only heaven knows
With whispered words of love, said low 

Where all my worries, left behind
There's moonshine, twilights’ sweet surprise
There are hellos but no goodbyes

Where nothings wrong and all is right
Until to life I must arrive
I am refreshed, I am revived
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Dietrich Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 9:51 PM
Fantastic. This form is new to me and so cool
Wolf Avatar
August 3, 2024 at 8:34 PM
What reason is there not to turn the best of night// into a grand celebration, come daylight... Inspirational penning, Crystol. Thanks you, Gershon
Woods Avatar
August 4, 2024 at 9:09 AM
Thank YOU! So glad to hear from you Gershon! Xo
Goldsmith Avatar
August 3, 2024 at 10:05 AM
I enjoyed reading your creative/fun "My Mind Vacation TRI" write. One can always take a fast vacation in the mind. It is a free trip. Hahaha!!! "Good Luck"  Have a wonderful/blessed day..........
Woods Avatar
August 3, 2024 at 1:17 PM
Tysm!! As long as we can find our way back again right?! Lol xo
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