Arthur Vaso Poet Light Verse

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This poem started as another subject completely, and I somehow ended up here. writing about another dark topic. Part 2 on its way!

My Mind Is Yours Part 1

My mind is yours

I think of you
As I stab away at your heart

I think of you
As blood spatters all over my face

I think of you
As the life ebbs out of your vassal

I think of you
As my hate grew into a flowing river of your blood

I think of you
As you stare into space with those dead eyes

I think of you
As they bury you in a poppers grave

I think of you
A childhood robbed

I think of you
The hand of god stealing an alter boys innocence

I think of you
Rotting piece of flesh in the ground

I think of you
A hateful cruel man of no honor

I think of you
No more 

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser February 26, 2015 at 10:27 AM a good way to move on and let go to think no more of those that hurt us.. //olive eloisa

Casarah Nance February 22, 2015 at 10:16 PM ... ;) Casarah Nance February 23, 2015 at 7:25 AM xxxoooxxxx:) Arthur Vaso February 22, 2015 at 10:21 PM xoxo6xoxo9xoxokiss

Jan Allison February 22, 2015 at 7:45 AM Such a dark intense write with incredible imagery Arthur - am very concerned about the poppers grave sounds like they are having a party! hugs Jan xx 7 xx

Eileen Manassian February 22, 2015 at 12:33 AM OH MY!!!!!!!!!! Arthur....this is absolutely stunning. I can understand the depth of emotions here from what is alluded to in the piece. WOW. Great write....Sad...but good. Can you imagine that I the choice section for submitting poems there is no REVENGE? I think there should be that option, don't you? Hugs Jan Allison February 22, 2015 at 7:42 AM there are many things I would love to see in the 'choice' section - sometimes it is so hard to categorise your poem by the limited choices:-) Hugs Jan xx Arthur Vaso February 22, 2015 at 12:37 AM What I write is emotion, what I believe is totally different, I also write not from my view, I try to step in the shoes of others and project their feelings and emotions not mine. So to answer your question simply, no revenge and forgiveness, is always the way to go! :) ( unless is poetry then make them rot in hell!!! LOL )

Nette Onclaud February 22, 2015 at 12:27 AM arthur, a melting pot of feelings so well expressed!.. oh my!.. huggs Arthur Vaso February 22, 2015 at 12:32 AM Thank you Nette, part 2 is now posted