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My Military Man

Loving a man in the military
it's such an honor to hold
at times its quite scary
the fear for the brave and the bold
It's heat breaking being so far away
its tragic not waking up to you everyday
missing the warmth of your smile
how it once brightened this dark room
The lonely feelings of exile
once in awhile we all consume
even though it can be rough
i'll smile through my tears
for my man is tough
with him i have no fears
this man is my hero
stationed so far away
risking his life
so we can wake in peace everyday
so i sincerely thank you 
for everything you do
and where ever your at tonight
just know that i love you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/20/2013 10:11:00 PM
very nice poem! very glad i readit! XD
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Date: 5/7/2012 1:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the "Holding out for a Hero" contest Amanda. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/6/2012 8:28:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Amanda. Outstanding tribute to your hero. God bless all our military heros. Kudos to you. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 5/5/2012 9:14:00 PM
Spouses of soldiers also serve, and are no less hero's. God bless you Amanda
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Date: 5/5/2012 6:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with your delightful salute to your hero. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/25/2012 10:53:00 AM
We owe a lot to those current serving overseas. Despite a few spelling errors here, this was a delightful read.
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Amanda Turnure
Date: 2/25/2012 7:14:00 PM
:) I think I fixed all of the errors! Thank you for letting me know. I type fast and my my computer was not showing me that I had misspelled anything. Thanks for reading! God Bless!
Date: 2/25/2012 9:24:00 AM
Such an amazing dedication to those who keep us safe so that we can do what w do without fear.... I thank him and all the rest also.... Michael
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Amanda Turnure
Date: 2/25/2012 9:26:00 AM
Thank you. :) God bless!
Date: 2/25/2012 9:02:00 AM
Very Good!
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