My Merlot Transformation

One glass of Merlot makes my innards tingle

Dry wine has a way of making me romantic

Two glasses blur my vision, but I'm eager to mingle

Half a carafe finds my language less than pedantic

No misinterpretation, dwell not on meanings semantic 



*Entry for Francine’s “Pick a Beverage, Any Beverage” contest
October 23, 2011 by Carolyn Devonshire

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 11/3/2011 9:17:00 PM
Way to go,Carolyn. Congrats on your win. I've heard of Merlot but really have no concept of it!
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Date: 11/1/2011 11:19:00 PM
what a magical piece that makes the nerves tingle, carols.. congrats on your win; wine is good unlike my coke consumption. :) huggs!
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Date: 11/1/2011 3:14:00 PM
hehehe haha... am not much of a wino but when I do go there, usually is with Merlot. Love the write, Carolyn, grats! Namaste~N
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Date: 11/1/2011 5:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Pick A Beverage, Any Beverage" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/31/2011 2:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Carolyn. Very cute. Loe, Joyce
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Date: 10/31/2011 2:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the Favorite Beverage Contest Carolyn
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Date: 10/31/2011 12:11:00 PM
pssst. thanks for the re-writes
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Date: 10/31/2011 12:10:00 PM
congrats on your 4th place win in the contest
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Date: 10/24/2011 12:59:00 PM
LOL, beware of any male Soupers you meet who present you with a bottle : ) Soup seems to be working at the moment... I'm missing you too, my friend
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Date: 10/23/2011 2:01:00 PM
Merlot is my drink for the cool winter and fall nights... My Mom always says if its not good enough to drink then its not good enough to cook with.. Thats why I never use cooking wine... Great entry sure to float to the top.. love Michael
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Date: 10/23/2011 12:33:00 AM
Enjoyed the read here Carolyn,, best wishes for the contest..! and i am happy with your comment on the poem reflections by Clintons red mill, i was thinking of the N J poets,, as i wrote this so i am pleased with your approval, i was incorporating the spirit of N J, "i hope" in the lines you questioned perhaps i used the wrong word.? all the best Joe.
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Date: 10/22/2011 11:22:00 PM
Love it Carolyn, may your haze always heighten your gaze! :) Luv, Lizzy
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Date: 10/22/2011 5:55:00 PM
I'll send over a bottle. You sound fun.
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Date: 10/22/2011 4:08:00 PM
this was nicely written I have a hard time with this form. good luck in the contest cory
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Date: 10/22/2011 3:21:00 PM
check rhyme scheme please ( ababb), thanks
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Date: 10/22/2011 12:30:00 PM
this is very cute ..my drink to make me those particular ways would be a margarita! Good luck in Francine's contest...love,Deb
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