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My Mentality

Coldest
Rotten
Honest
Modest

Coldest monster, Rotten attitude
But I'm honest, Modest, hardly rude



.......:JP)

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Charmaine Chircop

November 29, 2009 at 6:05 AM

i dont think your mentelaity is coldest,rotten,i think its honest,passionately modest,not nasty ..nooo..rude?:)not that i know of..sweet write..you made me laugh-i love your sense of humour --Charma

September 22, 2009 at 2:06 PM

I had to chuckle at the contradictions here. I guess that would be true for most of us depending on the day. Nice use of this concise form. The title fits the poem. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen

James Marshall Goff

July 25, 2009 at 12:45 PM

I have never tried this form! you nailed it with style! my friend, Jared! this is really a cool form to express much in few words! I feel some of these things too! I plead that I'm Gemini! and allowed! .... my Daughter says thats my excuse and laughs! I will try this sometime! I didn't find your cinquain you mentioned, prolly in your "poems not posted?" keep on writin'! and thanks always for your support ....jimbo