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My Mentality

Coldest Rotten Honest Modest Coldest monster, Rotten attitude But I'm honest, Modest, hardly rude .......:JP)

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/29/2009 6:05:00 AM

i dont think your mentelaity is coldest,rotten,i think its honest,passionately modest,not nasty ..nooo..rude?:)not that i know of..sweet write..you made me laugh-i love your sense of humour --Charma

Date: 9/22/2009 2:06:00 PM

I had to chuckle at the contradictions here. I guess that would be true for most of us depending on the day. Nice use of this concise form. The title fits the poem. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/25/2009 12:45:00 PM

I have never tried this form! you nailed it with style! my friend, Jared! this is really a cool form to express much in few words! I feel some of these things too! I plead that I'm Gemini! and allowed! .... my Daughter says thats my excuse and laughs! I will try this sometime! I didn't find your cinquain you mentioned, prolly in your "poems not posted?" keep on writin'! and thanks always for your support ....jimbo

John Freeman

Date: 7/20/2009 10:21:00 PM

Quite a collection of contraband, the mentality, Jared. I know a Jared Pickett, from Arkansas, are you he? God Bless, Moses

James Fraser

Date: 7/20/2009 12:50:00 PM

Great poem Jared>>James