My Mark

I see you,
thumb in
   mouth
blankie draped
over 
   your head
rubbing your cheek . . .

And holding
your own
son
   dwarfed by
your
daddy hands

comfort zone found
    already
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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July 8, 2011 at 11:39 AM
I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry today Jill. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, laughter, and loads of inspiration. Love, Carol
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June 23, 2010 at 9:36 AM
This is still one of my favorite poems written by you Jill. Love, Carol
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August 5, 2009 at 8:43 AM
I am reading my favorite poems today and just wanted to let you know this is still a favorite to me . Love, Carol
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