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My Man

For so long I have dreamed of you My mate for life the one that’s true Searching deep within my soul Longing for that one to hold Hoping nothing would tear us apart Burning desire ablaze in my heart Looking to the future for a sign Praying you're in God’s design Passion, romance, and gentle charm A kindred spirit with strong arms Kisses just as sweet as honey Never relying only on money Oh, to know you would be a treat When at last we finally meet Copyright © 2010 Lena “Lolita” Townsend

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/8/2011 8:23:00 PM
Beautifully written sonnet. This would be great for Valentine's Day.
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Date: 1/28/2010 12:12:00 PM
To think there is someone out there looking as intently through their dreams as you are yours. Most beautifully penned and your sentiment relayed. Have a great day. Lightwalker
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Date: 1/26/2010 6:49:00 AM
Lena, the rhyme and flow of this are perfect and the sentiment within this is so wonderfully clear. I am sure he is out there just waiting for you too. Wonderful write. Michael
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Date: 1/25/2010 9:11:00 AM
Just stopping by to say good morning and hope you have a great day.
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Date: 1/25/2010 8:40:00 AM
Anyone with a heart as sweet as yours deserves the kind of man you describe here, Lolita. I'm sure you will find he is in "God's design" for your future. Keep us posted! Love, carolyn
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Date: 1/24/2010 12:47:00 AM
Best wishes with this one Lena.Rgds Brian & thank you for your welcome comments today
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Date: 1/24/2010 12:08:00 AM
It is a bit in the same line as the poem I wrote today, Lena! Must be in the air, I guess. A very nice write and I relate completely, I sure wish for that as well. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 1/23/2010 4:03:00 PM
thank you for everything.
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Date: 1/23/2010 2:16:00 PM
Cool little sonnet, Lena! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/23/2010 11:35:00 AM
Lolita, Such a temptress as you cannot be required to wait long for your true love to appear. Your beauty and grace shine forth from your every poem. Thank you so much for your kind comments on my stuff. Love,Will
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Date: 1/23/2010 10:19:00 AM
Sweet verses and enjoy them. Have a great weekend. :)
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