My Luck Doesnt Favor

Who will keep me cozy like a teapot
Who will adore even my beauty spot

I feel so cold as if I am in arctic region
I need her so sternly in my every season

Who will give me hope when I feel depressed
By seeing whose look I will be impressed 

I make efforts so hard but my luck doesn’t favor
Now-a-days it seems we are two banks of a river
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Ramage Avatar
October 8, 2011 at 2:00 AM
Nice poem and you may find that if what you write is true, that if you relax and feel fulfilled without someone, you may then find someone. Sometimes the harder we look, the more difficult it is to find. Take care Lee
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