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My Lovely Pen

My future relies on You Without you my hand is empty Without you there would be no notes for me Without you my personal diary would be empty Without you my exam papers would be empty Without you my future would be empty Without you my life would be empty You are my Daring Lovely Pen...

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Beata Agustin

Date: 11/5/2024 7:34:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Azad Boodhun

Date: 2/27/2018 5:24:00 AM

A good dedication to your pen. good start

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/28/2016 7:11:00 AM

Fawwaaz Jaunbocus, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/5/2016 12:39:00 AM

Fawwaaz, enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs **SKAT**

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 10/15/2012 4:32:00 AM

How true of writers and poets! Without the pen life would take a very different turn. Nicely done Fawwaaz!

Fawwaaz Jaunbocus
Date: 10/16/2012 8:55:00 AM

Thank You Vicky !!! With that very pen , Great writers were doing their scripts/notes once :))

Audrey Haick

Date: 10/9/2012 1:49:00 PM

A perfect ode to your "Lovely Pen", Fawwaaz! We so easily forget how much we depend on our pens. Keep writing and thanks for sharing your thoughts. Always, Annalise

Fawwaaz Jaunbocus
Date: 10/9/2012 9:16:00 PM

Thank You Annalise!!Something that we tend to forget,our pen..!! :) Fawwaaz