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My Love You Are My Paradise

Life! Why Live? TO EMBRACE & TO SOAK IN GODS GREATEST GIFT... We are born.. We explore... We feel excitement... We find Love.... We exp a n d.. We guide our children.. We embrace our children.. We free our children.. We sit back.. We feel at ease. . We hold hands feeling all tension is released... We close our eyes.. We both pictured & soak in Gods greatest gift.. YOU & ME GOD EMBRACED US TOGETHER TO RECREATE LIFE.. MY LOVE YOU ARE MY "PARADISE"!...

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Winged Warrior

Date: 9/21/2017 9:52:00 AM

Beautifull penned jasmin...welcome to the Soup...god bless...^WW^

Phil Capitano

Date: 9/20/2017 1:24:00 PM

I concur; your poem brings out so many good thoughts both romantic in nature and guidance in life's journey. Well done and welcome.

Silent One

Date: 9/20/2017 12:20:00 PM

A beautiful romantic poem.. l like how you did this..

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 9/18/2017 9:59:00 AM

A really beautiful written poem, I really enjoyed reading it from begginning till the end, especially the line " my love, you re my paradise" it will certainly be my favourite line of this poem, seems like that you re new here, so I should welcome you to poeteysoup, have a very nice stay here and you re certainly goona like it as the community is really good, good luck

Jasmin Meany
Date: 9/19/2017 6:53:00 PM

Thank you :)