My Love You Are My Paradise

Life!
  Why Live?
TO EMBRACE & TO SOAK IN GODS GREATEST GIFT...
 We are born..
    We explore...
      We feel excitement...
       We find Love....
          We exp a n d..
            We guide our children..
We embrace our children..
  We free our children..
     We sit back..
        We feel at ease. .
           We hold hands feeling all tension is released...
    We close our eyes..
We both pictured & soak in Gods greatest gift..
    YOU & ME
     GOD  EMBRACED US         TOGETHER
        TO RECREATE LIFE..
     MY LOVE 
        YOU ARE MY 
            "PARADISE"!...
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Warrior Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 9:52 AM
Beautifull penned jasmin...welcome to the Soup...god bless...^WW^
Capitano Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 1:24 PM
I concur; your poem brings out so many good thoughts both romantic in nature and guidance in life's journey. Well done and welcome.
One Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 12:20 PM
A beautiful romantic poem.. l like how you did this..
Ajmal Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 9:59 AM
A really beautiful written poem, I really enjoyed reading it from begginning till the end, especially the line " my love, you re my paradise" it will certainly be my favourite line of this poem, seems like that you re new here, so I should welcome you to poeteysoup, have a very nice stay here and you re certainly goona like it as the community is really good, good luck
Meany Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 6:53 PM
Thank you :)
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