My Love Weeps

memories  of  your touch
tiptoes, treading on crutch 
from nape to heel completes
old halcyon heartbeats.
sunshine floods, flame ignites
wet wind blows, shards of lights
drenched in rain, my love weeps 
time dissolves, nightmare sleeps.





19th March , 2020
Sponsor	Dear Heart
Contest Name	Alexandrine - Modified
Theme:  love/grief  inspired
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Dietrich Avatar
March 28, 2020 at 5:09 PM
such interesting images, Debjani. gorgeous they are. Congrats in the contest.
Chiri Avatar
March 27, 2020 at 12:16 PM
Congrats on your top win!;)
La France Avatar
March 27, 2020 at 10:03 AM
Debjani, congratulations on your win in my contest, I like how you entwined your love and grief _Constance
Roper Avatar
March 25, 2020 at 10:55 PM
Debjani, great poem and a big congratulations on your win in Dear Heart’s Alexamdrine contest-. Hugs Eve
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