My Love Song In Tankas
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just in few moments
as the dusk obscures the sky
lids cover my eyes
my mind begins to reckon
the things I’ve done the whole day
a flurry it was
missing the sun in your eyes
my heart in regrets
didn’t sing you song last night
or gave you right back sweet hugs
now I sing my song
but ice cream melts on its cone
what else will I do
to win back the love from you
and make me smile and heart grows
plead down so deeply
asking you not to leave me
I am so sorry
this is the best melody
be sung in my poetry
I hope you can hear
song being played in G-Clef
lonely but lovely
Tanka Song with love I sing
hoping to ease all our pains
Written: Oct. 7, 2012
Second Place Winner
Contest: Tanka-Sad Song
Judged: 10/21/2012
Poet Sponsor: My Greatest Poet, Poet-Destroyer
Fourth Place Winner
Contest: Tanka me this, tanka me that, tanka me anypoem you want...
Judged: 10/23/2012
Poet Sponsor: SKAT
Copyright © Len Gasun | Year Posted 2012
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