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My Love Is Real

Mist fills the morning with freshened air Yellow fields smile past the distant shore Lullabies play a gentle tune Offer hope of what's coming true Velvet kisses in the month of June Every touch my heart doth swoon In winds of care I blow free Sending signals of my love for thee Reaching out for you and holding tight Each and every unguarded night Allow my arms to be a comfort place Left open for you with a warm embrace

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Date: 6/6/2017 11:11:00 AM
A very beautiful written poem, your every romantic poem is better than one another however I m new on this site and also have written some romantic poems and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
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Date: 3/11/2017 5:11:00 AM
Very romantic acrostic poem, Tim. I agree w/Laura, you're one of the kings of romance for sure. Congrats on POTD. Beautiful poetry. Love and peace always.
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Date: 3/9/2017 9:15:00 PM
Belated congrats on POTD, I knew this was going to be a special write, I told you first comment, watch this one fly to top ten where it belongs! Can't fave it again!
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Date: 3/8/2017 9:32:00 PM
Congrats on POTD, Tim! You're truly the king of romance poetry :)
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Date: 3/8/2017 1:01:00 AM
Lovely poem... congrats on being chosen...
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Tim Smith
Date: 3/8/2017 8:03:00 AM
Thank you Bernard.
Date: 3/8/2017 12:52:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD
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Tim Smith
Date: 3/8/2017 8:02:00 AM
Thank you Elizabeth
Date: 3/8/2017 12:42:00 AM
Love it :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 3/8/2017 8:00:00 AM
Thanks Debbie
Date: 3/8/2017 12:19:00 AM
Wow, it is very gentle and beautiful poem.
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Tim Smith
Date: 3/8/2017 7:59:00 AM
Thank you kindly Felicia
Date: 3/7/2017 9:45:00 PM
Congratulations on the Poem of the Day <3
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Tim Smith
Date: 3/8/2017 7:59:00 AM
Thanks Sara
Date: 3/7/2017 9:21:00 PM
Just dropped by to say congrats on POTD!!
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Tim Smith
Date: 3/7/2017 9:23:00 PM
Gracias
Date: 3/7/2017 9:13:00 PM
Hi Tim, I could feel the emotion in this write. And it felt honest and real. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Tim Smith
Date: 3/7/2017 9:14:00 PM
Thank you Alexis
Date: 3/7/2017 4:57:00 PM
Simple but also simply beautiful!!
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Tim Smith
Date: 3/7/2017 8:50:00 PM
Thank you Andrea
Date: 3/7/2017 4:21:00 PM
This is lovely Tim. It has such a reassuring feel to it. Congrats on a well deserved POTD. God Bless, JB
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Tim Smith
Date: 3/7/2017 8:49:00 PM
Thank you so much Judy
Date: 3/7/2017 4:14:00 PM
L o v e l y Tim--soft and sweet !! ~~ Jeanie ~~ xoxoxo
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Date: 3/7/2017 8:48:00 PM
Thank you Jeanie
Date: 3/7/2017 3:28:00 PM
Many congrats on POTD Tim:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/7/2017 8:47:00 PM
Thanks Jan
Date: 3/7/2017 2:17:00 PM
Hello Tim!! My first comment below still stands, and, in fact, is even amplified further since your fabulous acrostic was chosen for POTD!! My Best Congratulations to you on the POTD honor!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Tim Smith
Date: 3/7/2017 8:47:00 PM
Thank you again my friend.
Date: 3/7/2017 1:14:00 PM
Lovely, Tim. Congrats on POTD.
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Date: 3/7/2017 1:17:00 PM
Thank you very much Eileeh
Date: 3/7/2017 12:31:00 PM
Congratulations dear friend as always well deserved ~* Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/7/2017 1:16:00 PM
Thanks so much Eve
Date: 3/7/2017 9:04:00 AM
Congrats..on your well deserved poem ofthe day.Im not going to favour it twice...Or you 'd call me a Silly goose...Butam gonna rate it 7plus now. :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 3/7/2017 1:15:00 PM
Now who would call you a silly goose : )...lol
Date: 3/7/2017 8:47:00 AM
Way to go Tim, I see you have POTD! Congratulations my friend.
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Date: 3/7/2017 1:15:00 PM
Oh I am happy this brought a smile.
Date: 3/7/2017 8:45:00 AM
This is an amazing poem, Tim, cheered me up:) a 7:) congratulations on your POTD:)
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Date: 3/7/2017 8:11:00 AM
What a romantic display of love expressions dear, Tim! Superb! A seven!
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Date: 3/7/2017 1:14:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend
Date: 3/7/2017 7:54:00 AM
Back to pat you on the back, congratulations Tim..
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Tim Smith
Date: 3/7/2017 1:13:00 PM
Thanks Charlie
Date: 3/7/2017 7:34:00 AM
Congratulation. Warmth and love felt. Kai
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Tim Smith
Date: 3/7/2017 1:13:00 PM
Thank you kindly Kai
Date: 3/7/2017 7:03:00 AM
Congrats on POTD, Tim. Nice acrostic - did not even notice at first.
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Tim Smith
Date: 3/7/2017 1:12:00 PM
Thank you so much Agnes
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