My Love Is Real

Mist fills the morning with freshened air
Yellow fields smile past the distant shore

Lullabies play a gentle tune
Offer hope of what's coming true
Velvet kisses in the month of June
Every touch my heart doth swoon

In winds of care I blow free
Sending signals of my love for thee 

Reaching out for you and holding tight
Each and every unguarded night
Allow my arms to be a comfort place
Left open for you with a warm embrace
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Ajmal Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 11:11 AM
A very beautiful written poem, your every romantic poem is better than one another however I m new on this site and also have written some romantic poems and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
Robinson Jr. Avatar
March 11, 2017 at 5:11 AM
Very romantic acrostic poem, Tim. I agree w/Laura, you're one of the kings of romance for sure. Congrats on POTD. Beautiful poetry. Love and peace always.
Hamilton Avatar
March 9, 2017 at 9:15 PM
Belated congrats on POTD, I knew this was going to be a special write, I told you first comment, watch this one fly to top ten where it belongs! Can't fave it again!
Leiser Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 9:32 PM
Congrats on POTD, Tim! You're truly the king of romance poetry :)
Asuncion Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 1:01 AM
Lovely poem... congrats on being chosen...
Smith Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 8:03 AM
Thank you Bernard.
Kinch  Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 12:52 AM
Congratulations on POTD
Smith Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 8:02 AM
Thank you Elizabeth
Duncan Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 12:42 AM
Love it :)
Smith Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 8:00 AM
Thanks Debbie
Jarvis Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 12:19 AM
Wow, it is very gentle and beautiful poem.
Smith Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 7:59 AM
Thank you kindly Felicia
Ella Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 9:45 PM
Congratulations on the Poem of the Day <3
Smith Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 7:59 AM
Thanks Sara
Vaso Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 9:21 PM
Just dropped by to say congrats on POTD!!
Smith Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 9:23 PM
Gracias
Y. Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 9:13 PM
Hi Tim, I could feel the emotion in this write. And it felt honest and real. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Smith Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 9:14 PM
Thank you Alexis
Dietrich Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 4:57 PM
Simple but also simply beautiful!!
Smith Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 8:50 PM
Thank you Andrea
Ball Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 4:21 PM
This is lovely Tim. It has such a reassuring feel to it. Congrats on a well deserved POTD. God Bless, JB
Smith Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 8:49 PM
Thank you so much Judy
Bennett Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 4:14 PM
L o v e l y Tim--soft and sweet !! ~~ Jeanie ~~ xoxoxo
Smith Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 8:48 PM
Thank you Jeanie
Allison Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 3:28 PM
Many congrats on POTD Tim:-) hugs Jan xx
Smith Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 8:47 PM
Thanks Jan
Bateman Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 2:17 PM
Hello Tim!! My first comment below still stands, and, in fact, is even amplified further since your fabulous acrostic was chosen for POTD!! My Best Congratulations to you on the POTD honor!! Cheers and Best, Gary
Smith Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 8:47 PM
Thank you again my friend.
Manassian Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 1:14 PM
Lovely, Tim. Congrats on POTD.
Smith Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 1:17 PM
Thank you very much Eileeh
Roper Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 12:31 PM
Congratulations dear friend as always well deserved ~* Hugs Eve
Smith Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 1:16 PM
Thanks so much Eve
Chircop Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 9:04 AM
Congrats..on your well deserved poem ofthe day.Im not going to favour it twice...Or you 'd call me a Silly goose...Butam gonna rate it 7plus now. :)
Smith Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 1:15 PM
Now who would call you a silly goose : )...lol
Lamoureux Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 8:47 AM
Way to go Tim, I see you have POTD! Congratulations my friend.
Smith Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 1:15 PM
Oh I am happy this brought a smile.
Daniel Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 8:45 AM
This is an amazing poem, Tim, cheered me up:) a 7:) congratulations on your POTD:)
Trifiatis Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 8:11 AM
What a romantic display of love expressions dear, Tim! Superb! A seven!
Smith Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 1:14 PM
Thank you my dear friend
Smith Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 7:54 AM
Back to pat you on the back, congratulations Tim..
Smith Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 1:13 PM
Thanks Charlie
Neumann Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 7:34 AM
Congratulation. Warmth and love felt. Kai
Smith Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 1:13 PM
Thank you kindly Kai
Krampe Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 7:03 AM
Congrats on POTD, Tim. Nice acrostic - did not even notice at first.
Smith Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 1:12 PM
Thank you so much Agnes
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