My Love (End Line Poem)

I look over at you lying       STILL
Asleep beside me                IN
Our bed.  Your                   LOVE
Is like a warm embrace      AFTER	
A long time away.               ALL
The good things like           THIS
Till the end of                    TIME
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Byrne Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 7:38 PM
Well crafted!
Gorelick Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 7:25 PM
Wonderful job Laura..I think this is special..Hg and Dane Ann will really like this one. BG
Owens Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 7:16 PM
Very nice endline poem...enjoyed...good luck in the contest...Marty
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