My Love

MY LOVE
                                                                                                                                     
       That was my sudden glance
                                                                                                                                           
            to sink in your eyes                         
                                                                                                                                                                                      
          just to realize
                                                                                                                                     
      my first passion by chance.
                                                                                                                               
 
        Lack of courage to obstruct!
                                                                                                                                 
             Wobbling to pull curtain.
                                                                                                                                        
                I loved in vain
                                                                                                                                 
        to depart with bleeding heart

 11/ 09/17
                  8-line poem 1 to 5 words per line Contest by Rick Parise
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Inman Avatar
November 21, 2017 at 4:32 AM
Sad, sweet write Anisha.
Gauthier Avatar
November 10, 2017 at 10:33 PM
Congratulations, Anisha.
Barden Avatar
November 10, 2017 at 7:30 PM
Very beautifully woven tapestry of love, Anisha - nicely done! Congrats on your win - blessings! :-) <3
Warrior Avatar
November 10, 2017 at 6:04 PM
Congrats!!! Anisha...beautiful write my friend...god bless...^WW^
Rodrigues Avatar
November 10, 2017 at 5:49 PM
Congrats Anisha!
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