My Love

My Love… 

My Love…
Aren't you real? You, my dear! You, my dear!
Am I awake? Are you here? Are you here?
Your voice echoes, in my dream, too extreme,
Like a mirage, you are near, you are near.
If you are here or sincere, reappear!
Pain from your love, too severe, too severe.
With the morning breeze, I'm the lips; you're the kiss.
No matter what, do appear, do appear.
Not having you in my dreams, I will cry,
Come back again, do not fear, do not fear
What’s real? Love is real? Is it true?
If that is real, can you hear? Can you hear?
I seek nothing, no more glee, no more fright.
Only your love is sincere, is sincere.
Silent Haloo, you’re drunk. Love will remain;
No more crying, no more tears, no more tear.

5/1/2016  Haloo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Bocsa Avatar
December 3, 2018 at 11:36 AM
In your poetry Love seems fallen in love with Love. I do not if it is a poetical ”I”, or personal experience, too. A poem mirroring subtle teachings of Rumi. Also, a thinker like Kierkegaard tried to classify and find a hierarchy intellectual/spiritual (Christian)love/ and personal love. His own life was marked/changed by such a choice. Corinthians 13 also is one of the most wonderful lines from Bible, explaining love as charity.
Salehi Avatar
December 3, 2018 at 6:37 PM
Very nice statement Love seems fallen in love with love... Rumi is a prophet to me... I have all his books... thank you.
Ajmal Avatar
June 17, 2017 at 11:15 AM
A very beautiful written poem, yeah it s true that when someone you loved with all your heart left you or went away it seems like your purpose of living has ended, I truly wish from hear that you find your love and remain happy with him/her all your life, however I m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
Salehi Avatar
June 18, 2017 at 2:00 AM
Thank you Faraz...... Okay ... I will..
Macfarlane Avatar
June 6, 2016 at 9:06 PM
Sincere love without fear is the the only one to seek, wonderful write and congrats on your win. Hugs
Salehi Avatar
June 7, 2016 at 2:04 PM
Thank you Cecilia. Are you thinking about my suggestion....
Devnath  Avatar
June 6, 2016 at 10:14 AM
Beautiful Ghazal my lovely friend read from you. i am inspired by you to write Rubai, so just written. Please read to confirm whether that's right or not. About your Ghazal, i say it's very nice. A 7 i feel. Loved always, bl
Salehi Avatar
June 6, 2016 at 6:05 PM
Thanks BL, I'll take a look soon......
Austin Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 11:57 AM
The repetition is very effective here. Fine work, my friend. Love, daver
Salehi Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 3:25 PM
Thank you very much....Thank you very much....Thank you very much....Thank you very much....
Devnath  Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 2:09 PM
Lovely Ghazal on love beautifully expressed my lovely friend. If music is added with it, it will be hit. A 7 sure. Loved always, bl
Salehi Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 8:03 PM
Thank you my friend. I appreciate your remarks.
Dalei Avatar
May 7, 2016 at 2:26 AM
Nice ghazal. Feel glad to read. Congratulations on ur win. Definitely 7 from me.........//:) hugs
Salehi Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 7:53 PM
Thank you my dear friend, thanks for kind words
Heemstra Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 6:21 PM
Great write! Congrats on win!
Salehi Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 7:24 PM
Thank you very much..
Negron Flores Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 7:56 PM
Congratulations Pashang on the placement of the contest
Salehi Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 10:47 PM
Thanks Nayda, you're always very nice to me. thanks for selecting my work.
Roper Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 7:36 PM
Pashang, congratulations on your win on how you feel about love around the world. Hugs Eve
Salehi Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 10:45 PM
Thanks Eve.... Love is a gift, a gift of sight; It lets you see in the darkest night. Love is light and light is warm. If you got it, trust the storm.
Scars Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 4:21 PM
Pashang, congrats on your win in the contest :)-luloo
Salehi Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 10:46 PM
Thanks Luloo... congratulations to you too..
Dietrich Avatar
May 2, 2016 at 3:51 PM
Great Ghazal, Pashang. The ere rhyme was a great choice!!
Salehi Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 2:27 AM
Thank you my dear. I 'm glad you liked it...
Chalise Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 1:59 PM
Nice to read.
Salehi Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 2:25 AM
Thank you Sir...
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