My Love

My love Oh how gentle and cute thee is Standing there You did my legs freeze I hope I shall yours be For though I’m miles away In thee arms I’ll be I’ll come on Sunday The day you are holy And we will stay upon bench Listening bird singing Song composed For you and I. By koena mothiba

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/1/2015 4:11:00 AM

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/29/2015 10:11:00 PM

Koena, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Koena Mothiba
Date: 11/30/2015 1:07:00 AM

THANK YOU FOR THE WARM WELCOME IN THIS POETRY SOUP.I APPRECIATE YOUR SUPPORT

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 11/27/2015 10:44:00 AM

Hi Koena, this is such a lovely, romantic first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita

Koena Mothiba
Date: 11/30/2015 1:12:00 AM

THANK YOU PANDITA FOR THE GREAT AND WONDERFUL WELCOME IN THIS LOVELY POETRY FAMILY.

Skat A

Date: 11/27/2015 9:03:00 AM

Koena, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"

Koena Mothiba
Date: 11/30/2015 1:14:00 AM

GOOD MORNING SKAT IM HAPPY TO GET SUCH AN AMAZING YOUNG FRIEND THROUGH POETRY.AND I THANK YOU FOR SUCH AN AMAZING WELCOME. WITH LOVE THE POET KOENA